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avneriginal
11-20-2007, 04:09 AM
Hi there,

This is my most recent show reel.

Any comments, thoughts, feedback or critique is most welcome.

Right click on the image below to save link as a file or click the following link to watch the show reel (http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/10/showReel_nov07.mov).

http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/11/lifting-web.jpg (http://www.avneriginal.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/10/showReel_nov07.mov)

avneriginal
11-21-2007, 08:35 AM
Any thoughts or comments on my work so far anyone?

Any feedback will be much appreciated. Thanks heaps.

josecarlospoeiras
11-21-2007, 12:39 PM
Good reel man,

I think you should work the overlapping animation and lock out for the joint pops, on knees and elbows. keep up :thumbsup:

cya

avneriginal
11-22-2007, 01:32 AM
Good reel man,

I think you should work the overlapping animation and lock out for the joint pops, on knees and elbows. keep up :thumbsup:

cya

Thanks for the feedback Jose,
Could you please be more spesific about the locks and pops that you saw in the reel? What were the clips that had them etc?

Cheers
I appreciate your feedback

Obraxis
11-22-2007, 06:56 PM
Hey man, not a bad reel.

Agreed, there seemed to be a fair amount of joint popping going on, I espicially noticed it during the Block-Push.

Your timing is just about there on the shots but I also noticed you seem to have very rigid animation. i'm not sure if you're smoothing your splines/keys enough as it looks very pose-to-pose.

Good luck with it tho.

avneriginal
11-26-2007, 05:10 AM
Hey man, not a bad reel.

Agreed, there seemed to be a fair amount of joint popping going on, I espicially noticed it during the Block-Push.

Your timing is just about there on the shots but I also noticed you seem to have very rigid animation. i'm not sure if you're smoothing your splines/keys enough as it looks very pose-to-pose.

Good luck with it tho.

Thanks for the feedback Obraxis!
I was hoping maybe you could be a bit more spesific and point out the clips you felt were too rigid?

Thanks for that

Cheers

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