Environment: Polluting our planet

[tuzz]

the clouds and sky look good. but somehow dont seem to fit. they are more of a photo, i would guess... ?!

the rest is too cg-ish... i can see that its cg and that doesnt fit. the whole scene has too bad lightning imo...

but i cannot say what to change, cause i am bad at lightning as well :hmm:

[superfly18]

my biggest concern of this is the water and grass. While not bad, you can see how the water/smudge doesn't look real...you can see it tiled, it doesn't look like it is alive...but flat.

A pic i made, has some real nice water i think.

http://www.superfly.g3z.com/gun_shooting6.jpg?

Lastly, you're trying show us a picture of destruction and polluting, why put up a beautiful sky? Or is it just me seeing the contradictory..:surprised

Overall, not bad at all for your FIRST finished piece, my first piece was nothing like that. Keep it up man.:thumbsup:

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