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GTsw
11-09-2007, 05:00 PM
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Title: DragONtFLY
Name: Denis Tolkishevsky
Country: Russia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

The first variant of this work I have made in 2006 for competition spent on one of Russian websites. Recently has decided to alter it, something has added, something has removed, has changed materials and render. And now I expose it on your court.

Eomer41
11-09-2007, 11:06 PM
This render looks very well made. Nice work on the lighting and texturing. The modeling looks really detailed with all of the little pieces on the machine. It almost seem like it could almost be an old toy. I can't find anything really wrong with this render, except that there is a mecanical dragonfly.:D

What was your lighting set up on this? How long did it take to compleat? Nice work!

IanSkip
11-10-2007, 01:10 AM
Nice lighting and texture use. The mechincal dragon fly adds a sense of sci-fi too. Cool job.

brentagain
11-10-2007, 01:47 AM
excellent render,and a very good mechanical design on the dragonfly.
I`m assuming it`s just a single vray light in the window?

VKarlsson
11-10-2007, 02:37 AM
Very very nice! The lightning, texture and render is very great. My only crit is the wire in the upper left corner seem a bit angular.

fx81
11-10-2007, 04:49 AM
wow thats awsome. i think the render is great although it can use little more depth of field and some film noise. also may be some light color variation. but great work over all. :thumbsup:

stefanosoik
11-10-2007, 11:18 AM
This is great! congrats 5 starts from me :applause:

Artist-Lounge
11-10-2007, 01:23 PM
Amazingly done, :thumbsup:

How many hours you spent doing this?

MiguelAngeloCBT
11-10-2007, 02:00 PM
Nice concept of the Dragon Fly! Awesome! Pure Fantasy! :)

Silverwing
11-10-2007, 03:17 PM
Very well done!
Amazing details in modeling and texturing!
Great lighting too... I love this picture.
Your concept is awesome... Keep it
up! almost 5*

CGadrian
11-10-2007, 05:23 PM
super work !

5 stars !

ICESEASON
11-10-2007, 06:34 PM
好,有内涵5*,对你很满意

Schokoladenmann2p3
11-10-2007, 08:38 PM
very solid work ! :thumbsup: overall look very fine ! and the model is just great !

pablotesta
11-11-2007, 04:36 AM
Nice picture! great shaders and lighting, and my only critic is in the middle part, I see very flat, dark and weird. Nice modelling too!

ArTooRo
11-11-2007, 02:39 PM
Really impressive work - i especially like the metallic shaders.
Great job, high grade - 5 stars.

animatoor
11-11-2007, 02:50 PM
hey superb work man,,,,way to go,,i really like the detail and the render is really good too:)

which renderer did you use ?

animatoor
11-11-2007, 02:52 PM
5 stars :)

GTsw
11-11-2007, 03:31 PM
By all thank for good responses, I am glad that you liked my dragonfly. For visualization I used Vray, in a stage one Vray light + HDR on an environment. Work I made about 3 weeks, in free time.

leishen
11-12-2007, 02:56 AM
Extraordinary that entire circumstances exaggerates is true. The model and lamp light are all very good , I think of dragonfly's wing if still mechanical few of energy's words will be much better

LuisTelesforo
11-12-2007, 10:33 PM
amazing details :thumbsup:

Daffydd
11-12-2007, 11:17 PM
Fantastic! The piece lives in its details! Great work!

Daf

AminNadery
11-13-2007, 09:03 AM
very nice
This is great! congrats 5 starts from me

madm4tt
11-13-2007, 09:53 AM
Photoreal Render, and nice design.
Good Job Man!

Bye

jsahn
11-13-2007, 05:36 PM
awesome!
interesting placement of objects around the dragonfly. it certainly shows what it's made out of.

RorschART
11-14-2007, 04:02 AM
Amazing ! :thumbsup:

Dosia
11-14-2007, 07:48 AM
respect man! )
фирма :)

sgm
11-14-2007, 11:55 AM
Very good job :thumbsup:

arran1
11-14-2007, 03:11 PM
great job! my only crit would be that the wings look too flat - i think it would look better if they had some curve to their shape.

suhail-inayath
11-14-2007, 07:35 PM
first of all good job... very photorealistic and i love the metal it came out real good... and the wood , amazing just amazing ... by the way what is the key for ..?? 5 stars :)

Mawh
11-14-2007, 08:24 PM
So beautiful and poetic! 5 stars! Great! :)

boutiquecraft
11-15-2007, 01:48 AM
fantastic work!

SHOCKproof
11-15-2007, 12:41 PM
Awsome work m8......

Cheshie
11-15-2007, 04:12 PM
Eh...it's alright.
J/K that's incredible! I'd love to see how it would move, you know, scampering around the tools and whatnot. Really great! Thanks for "exposing it on our court." ;-)

Braetzel
11-15-2007, 05:36 PM
Privet,


One single word: Excellent! Like the others, great job, interesting image thanks to the rendering well made, textures are pretty good. But the most positive thing is the metallic part actually. It seems really real. But the key, what's its goal? Is there any secret door to open? Anyway, keep it up. one thing i've almost forgotten. Could you put the mesh's scene in order to have a look, a close up one!!!:thumbsup:

shimbulaya
11-15-2007, 07:12 PM
now this is brilliant! the details just amazed me! composition and lights - actually everything in this render - 5! :thumbsup:

bobecek
11-15-2007, 10:00 PM
beatiful, great job man :)

laxina
11-17-2007, 08:36 AM
excellent, the material and lighting is very realistic, I love the lense most, hehe

keep on good work man

usganc15
11-17-2007, 09:38 AM
gtsw, what an original idea! detailed bits and pieces too. looking forward for ur other surprises. juz wondering, how do u make the wings?

Limponi
11-17-2007, 10:24 AM
wow.. good render... and impressive idea...
congratulation....

Espedito
11-17-2007, 06:22 PM
:thumbsup: Great work. With good material and
It remember as a future in the past....:thumbsup:

jdelatorre
11-17-2007, 06:25 PM
Great job on this piece. i love the lighting!

CHSKY
11-18-2007, 06:59 AM
great work!!!

vikramvr
11-18-2007, 01:58 PM
This is fantastic work. The lighting, the modeling, texturing, all spot on.. Am in love with a dragonfly for the first time

Kaleen
11-18-2007, 07:11 PM
Nice, very nice

martinvogelzang
11-19-2007, 12:35 PM
Excellent. I looked at it for a long time. Very inspiring.

Comments:

- I think you used photoshop to simulate DOF. Does not look 100% convincing.

- I think the flat part of the hammer is a bit to flat and reflective. (the round grooved parts are amazing !)

- There is something about the looking glass that does not feel right to me. It struck me at first glance, but I can not tell you what it is. Maybe the strong bright highlights where the rest of the scene is softer

GoodfellowStudio
11-20-2007, 02:38 AM
I love your use of clockwork, really inspiring for some of the work i'm doing :-) (course nothing like the silly thing i have in my portfolio, lol)

thanks for this!

PDuff
11-20-2007, 05:59 PM
very cool. great concept.

Krishk
11-21-2007, 05:07 AM
Hi!

Its looking more natural. good lighting, materials and rendering.
You are the one. Keep it up.

Best Regards
Krishna
krishnacreationz.com

MEGO3D
11-21-2007, 02:52 PM
Ha! I saw your work at Render.ru

Lukem
11-23-2007, 01:20 PM
I love the concept and the level of detail & realism in the textures is superb.

Points
11-25-2007, 07:42 PM
I love your work
Just on crit. To me, left wing from my view looks see-through little bit but not on right wing.
Maybe it's my eyes. Sorry for my english.
Anyway, 5 star work!

lighthunder
11-26-2007, 11:56 AM
great work:applause:good feel

DigitalSprocket
11-29-2007, 06:30 PM
Truly a wonderful and awe inspiring piece. I really like the choice of environment. It's great that we see a story about the inventor by way of his old fashioned shop, it makes his invention even more spectacular. 5 stars!

_david
11-29-2007, 11:45 PM
Just great. Perfection in every little detail; even rust on the steelwork in the background. Very believable. Also because of the very well shading and lighting.
Well... not the first to say that, :rolleyes:, but I had to...

Massive piece! Cheers

IvanMitkowski
12-01-2007, 07:15 PM
this is so nice, i wanna see it animated, it would have fit into a movie like pans labyrinth so well

AkinYaman
12-03-2007, 09:25 AM
perfect render and study, five stars

SinP
12-17-2007, 07:04 AM
Nice picture!
Great shaders and lighting!
I like so much!!:thumbsup:

vanda
12-17-2007, 09:41 AM
Excellent modeling, render and concept:bounce:

centavrus
01-07-2008, 10:58 AM
great! otli4naya rabota

p22dunbar
01-14-2008, 07:05 PM
crazy, just crazy!

Molier
01-23-2008, 08:35 AM
Great work. :applause:

sam4grafix
02-07-2008, 12:52 PM
love the way u rendered the mosquito :)
:bounce:

nightwoodwolf
02-07-2008, 03:43 PM
looks very realistic :thumbsup:

burgulkut
02-20-2008, 09:48 AM
Great work, man !
I'm really impressed : everything seems so real !!

Excellent lighting and texturing.

Poetic idea though..

fahadkhan
03-11-2008, 05:13 PM
You`ve done a fantastic job,, :thumbsup:

tommyus
03-14-2008, 07:20 PM
AMAZING! :thumbsup:

tommyus
03-14-2008, 07:21 PM
exquisite:eek:

zoster
03-19-2008, 09:39 PM
really tasteful.
you see a lot of professional work around here, but a quite a big percent fall on the kitschy side. not yours. sincerest congrats.

cmcpheet
08-30-2008, 03:32 AM
That's really cool. It looks like it was made by someone normal sized, but obviously for someone small enough to pilot it. Or then again, maybe he just liked making strange things like that.

TheLionKing
11-07-2008, 01:35 PM
This is impressive!
like the feeling of the workshop

mortezanajafi
01-14-2009, 07:15 AM
really nice , great details , light & texture (5*)

i will be glad if i now your opinion about my works thanks

bwphillips
02-02-2009, 10:38 PM
I saw something very similar to this, but it was a spider. Great job on the texturing. I like all the parts you used for the modeling of the fly. It would be cool to see in action.

killerdeity
03-23-2009, 04:22 AM
I like the style,Steampunk.

neeraj987
03-24-2009, 09:51 AM
Gud concept.....
nice details,gud work.....

lotaH
03-28-2009, 01:03 AM
Great job, man!!

I love see the mash...

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