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jbrophy
04-13-2003, 11:53 PM
Started working on a head a couple weeks back and have added a little here and there when work has permitted. No textures yet. The head is still very WIP but I thought I would post to get some thoughts. The end guy will be kind of a space assassin I think. Energy sword sorta thing.

thanks for your time

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/133961.jpg
leigh
04-14-2003, 12:13 AM
Looks interesting but it's hard to crit the head from this angle :)
Something looks a little bit strange about the shape of the head, but it might just be the angle.

He certainly looks shady enough to be an assassin :D

Keep going, it's a bit early in the process to give very much constructive criticism :thumbsup:
jbrophy
04-14-2003, 04:07 AM
oops
jbrophy
04-14-2003, 04:08 AM
Leigh - thanks for the reply. I agree I probably postd a little early on this one.

Some quick updates. Not sure what I am going to do for the chest armor and I just started on the abs.



http://www.vi2.com/getFile/134077.jpg

and

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/134080.jpg
jbrophy
04-14-2003, 04:28 PM
Commence shameless bumping
Neison
04-14-2003, 05:11 PM
It's coming along great, I think the shape and the feel of the head is excellent, the only thing that bothers me is the eyelids seem too thick or don't lay on his eyeball like they should. Also, concerning the eyelids, the outer edge is too smooth (no creases at all!) Look at photos of eyes/eyelids and put some more details in.
jbrophy
04-15-2003, 01:36 AM
Neison - yeah I have gotten lots of replies like that about the eyes. They are definatly on the list. Thanks
dmak
05-01-2003, 02:09 AM
The space assassin is looking good, cool armor! I agree with the critiques on the eye lids, otherwise nothing else, all looks great. Where are the updates? :) You must be pretty busy. heh. I'm looking forward to updates.

Dmak
www.faktorystudios.com
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