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SoadFromPoland
11-07-2007, 06:59 PM
Hi!
This is my newest model. 3dsmax + Photoshop + crazybump
http://www.freewebs.com/soad3d/Little%20bird/1.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/soad3d/Little%20bird/2.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/soad3d/Little%20bird/3.jpg

demoncage
11-07-2007, 07:02 PM
looks pretty cool man. i really like the dull steel look. overall form seems ok, but the plating is very imprecise.

Raman
11-08-2007, 02:55 PM
Me like. But the plates need work. It is not easy to make those crisp. I sometimes end up drawing the lines as splines on the hull, in order to act as guides.

Is the minigun correct? It looks like a three barrel .50. Also, is the ammo chute supposed to go straight through the wing?

Gaboon
11-08-2007, 05:37 PM
Good start. I didn't notice the plates, but I would dirty up the texture a bit. Looks like it just flew off the assembly line.

dpizzle
11-09-2007, 12:12 AM
yeah, maybe you could make the plates flow better with the geometry, and have fewer pieces (mainly at the start of the tail section - lot of little pieces there, maybe should only be a few bigger ones)

:scream:

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