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jerryziggy2004
11-07-2007, 07:43 AM
Hey everybody I'm working on this clip and would like some feedback. It's still needs a lot of work, but if anyone could give me some feedback or some ideas so I can strengthen it I would highly appreciate it. Thanks

here is the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucqpijSEpCM

KyleG
11-07-2007, 01:45 PM
The pose with his hands on his hips feels a little off balance and could be more dynamic, try shifting his weight more over his screen left leg and straightening his screen right leg (see attached image) also the foot tap at the end feels really weird, right now he's tapping his foot that is holding all his weight, which is almost impossible to do, also you have his root moving up and down when he taps his foot, which you don't want to happen, make sure the foot that is tapping is not the foot that his holding the character up, fixing the other pose I talked about should help fix this

kasana
11-07-2007, 02:13 PM
Nice efforts.
but some very basic mistake as weight shift. you can't move your feet even by inch without moving the Hip or pelvis first.
Hey Keyle G..........I apperciate your respond.its really good to see people like you around us.

jerryziggy2004
11-07-2007, 10:43 PM
Hey thanks for the feedback you guys. I have included an updated version on youtube

here is the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4H_k39yjpCQ

jerryziggy2004
11-07-2007, 10:47 PM
Hey guys thanks for the feedback I posted an updated version check it out

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4H_k39yjpCQ

jerryziggy2004
11-07-2007, 10:48 PM
Sorry about the double replies I guess it takes a minute for the posting to come up. I updated the animation and brought the cameras in tighter hope this works better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kQltfCoSnE (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4H_k39yjpCQ)

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