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wonder
04-13-2003, 03:58 PM
I am working on a 3D-still about D-day, this is one of the guys. still WIP.
some feedback so far?
http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/13215128-g.jpg

Dark-Angel
04-13-2003, 05:07 PM
allied or axis?

LORDISH
04-13-2003, 05:40 PM
Allied, judging from the helmet. Good start dude.

JonasNoell
04-13-2003, 05:47 PM
I tried to load the pic for over 10 minutes now and finally gave it up...

Edit: It works fine for me now and is looking very promising. Keep it up :thumbsup:

Kamul
04-13-2003, 06:19 PM
Ummm are u really sure that this is going to be loaded someday
°~°.I have a 1500k connection and I'm still waiting that something apears

wonder
04-13-2003, 07:13 PM
i guess something wrong with the sever i store it. I am so sorry....
I made some update for him.and a bigger render. thanx 4 all the reply!!
http://www.wonder3d.com/2.jpg

JonasNoell
04-13-2003, 07:27 PM
Lol sorry but your server sucks, had to wait about 15 minutes till it was loaded...
Uploaded the file for you, it's really looking great man!

http://josh.ch/phpmywebmin/_uploads/cANt/Head.jpg

S_3D_A
04-13-2003, 07:56 PM
He looks like he is about to get blown up:) Nice start only crit I have is small but why is the stuff on the side of his head green? What is that?? Is that suppose to be mud???

wonder
04-13-2003, 08:38 PM
thanx,cANt! u r so kind~
S_3D_A: yea,on the side of his face is mud,some nasty thing, u know,when the soldiers getting lands, they should crawls all the way.
I will keep post my progress here.
thanx again for your reply

Caman0
04-14-2003, 07:20 AM
great!

he looks like that sniper from Saving Private Ryan
Jackson he was called i think


good work

WU2
04-14-2003, 07:46 AM
I agree with Caman0. Was the likeness intentional? Nice style...can't wait to see the whole thing

Kogepan
04-14-2003, 08:03 AM
Looks good. :thumbsup:

A few critiques, for your pleasure :

The distance between the eyes and the brow is a bit too much. I like the idea of exaggerating that feature, but you've gone a bit over the top, imho. He looks a bit freakish from the side.

His lips are too saturated.

The tip of his nose is a little too sharp. I also think he would look better with a bit more definition in the bridge area, but that's just personal preference.

And I think the mud on the side of his face should be more brown, less green.

Oh, also, his cheeckbones seem just a *touch* too high. Imho.

But other than that, I like him. And the concept intrigues me especially. I'll be watching this thread.

JeP
04-14-2003, 08:49 AM
I found too that he looks like a guy of the movie "saving private Ryan"... yes perhaps the sniper, I don't remember...
I think his nose is a bit to smooth, and why cant you show us more his helmet ? I think it's a bit too dark...

wonder
04-14-2003, 11:08 AM
yea!!! he is!the sniper of "saving private Ryan". His name is jackson! He is a very impresstive man in my mind, When I plan to design a guy in D-Day, the first thing appear in my mind is his face.
Kogepan:I agree with u, the distance of eys and brow is a bit too much, i will fix it later. but the saturat dark lips is his Characteristic. :D
JeP: his helmet is still WIP, I will show u more after i finish it~

:)

wonder
04-21-2003, 11:47 AM
Guys~ I get back on this thread again, I have finish 90% of his body,He is dragging the body of his friend with right hand, and left hand with a gun.
come on,guys,tell me what u think.:)
hope this time,my server works.. :P
http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/21185700-1.jpg

cyberjunkie
04-21-2003, 12:45 PM
Looking Great! :bounce:

Witchy
04-21-2003, 04:46 PM
Nice stuff, the resemblance is very good. If he is dragging soeone would he be slightly more stooped- bodies are heavy. The model is really nice though.

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