hey, little girl head pracice. any suggestion?

[betelgeuse]

Hey, I think it's coming along really well. The only thing I'd mention is that there's a crease extending from the nose into the forehead that you could smooth out a little.
Other than that, nice job.

[ua858]

thank u.betelgeuse. I did change about the crease on the head.
that is the body I did so far. any suggestion ,guys.thanks

[betelgeuse]

The body is looking nice, too. But the division between the legs (crotch area) is too severe and the seperation between the legs is too much. I think if you print out your image and roughly sketch in the legs without the pants, you'll see what I mean.

[ua858]

hey,betelgeuse. thank. right. actually I did not feel comfort with her legs and hip before.how does she look like now? better?
The basic concept of this character is from a doll in the magazine.

[betelgeuse]

Good job. I like the wings. Can you post a picture of the doll reference image?

[ua858]

here is the pic.

[ua858]

hey, it is almost done. how does she look?

[ua858]

bigger

[betelgeuse]

It looks great. The wings could be a little thinner. Right now they look very heavy.
Are you going to texture it?

[ua858]

I fix the wing and make it thinner.
now I am start texturing her. thanku ,betelgeuse. u are so nice and very helpful. excuse my bad english:)

[ua858]

HEY guys,I did some texture on her body. any suggestion are be great.
thank u.
well.I am thinking how to texture the wings.

[betelgeuse]

It looks nice. I really have no criticism. Well, except that her chin and lower cheek area looks grayish like she needs to shave. That may be just due to the lighting - I'm not sure.

[funnydoodle]

yeah she looks like a guy in a girly outfit lol..... reminds me of MTV's jackass when Dave England dress up as a meter fairy. looks a lot like ur model...... go shave her !

[ua858]

thank u guys. I redo the textures and have a lightings on her now. how about she looks right now? hope she looks better.
waiting for any suggestions.:)

[ua858]

close up

[betelgeuse]

Looking good. But why did you lower the area where the pants/legs meet? It looked better the way you had it before (to me at least). I also think she would look cuter with a smaller nose. Keep going!

[funnydoodle]

looks better alrite...... but the texture for the hair needs tweaking ok.... ican see it strectched... uhm..... carry on!

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