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Teyon
04-13-2003, 02:22 AM
http://members.lycos.co.uk/teyon/Images/sketches/water.jpg

It's been awhile since I've posted any kind of drawing, so I thought I'd start again. This is pencil on printer paper, scanned in greyscale with level adjustment in Photoshop. I haven't decided if I will color it yet but I'm looking for any honest crits.

Thanks in advance!

-T.

dmcgrath
04-13-2003, 07:20 AM
Honestly, its pretty sweet. I like the textures and the pose alot. Including the facial expression, it gives a lot of personality. good job.
The only crit form me is the fingers and thumbs look a little short. The one's wrapped around the pole are okay but his relaxed hand looks small, especially for someone so tall and lean. And on his left hand the outline of the fingers is running a tangent with the outline on his heel. But that problem would disappear if you make those fingers a bit longer.
Overall, really nice job. I had to look hard to find something that didn't seem quite right on it.

Teyon
04-13-2003, 07:23 AM
Hey! Thanks! Those fingers were supposed to look like they were folded...I guess I didn't pull that off very well. I'll see about fixing them. Thanks alot for the honest reply!

Alevice
04-13-2003, 07:15 PM
Beautiful. Apart from the hand, the only thing i wouyld like to see is a back ground. The bg can be implemented hen its gonna be colored, tho.:thumbsup:

hanzo
04-14-2003, 05:30 AM
WHO DO YOU WORK FOR Teyon? errrr! D:

efoo
04-14-2003, 05:59 AM
Nice work! i will strongly recomment u apply colour for your work, maybe with photoshop... i 'm sure it will be very impressive!! :bounce:

ken
04-14-2003, 06:15 AM
great work....i like the stroke, as well as the figure...
i suggest that if u colour it ....
it's perfect...:thumbsup:

Teyon
04-14-2003, 12:43 PM
Thanks gang! I'm going to start coloring it now. I went back to the sketch and put in a bit more of a backdrop. I'll post a colored version when I'm done. :)

Alevice
04-14-2003, 09:43 PM
May i give a try for coloring? I need to practice my textures and stuff.

Teyon
04-15-2003, 03:08 AM
Please, go ahead. I'd be honored!

Alevice
04-15-2003, 03:41 AM
Alrite :D

Expect something around the whole holy week =P

freddy7133d
04-15-2003, 11:47 PM
A really! nice piece you got here:bounce: ..your line is really amazing..,is it ok if I color it too...:rolleyes:

PixeleD
04-15-2003, 11:47 PM
Wow! I dig your style! Maybe he'd look a bit cooler with a straw sticking out of his mouth, if you know what i mean :p

Very nice dude! :)

Teyon
04-16-2003, 01:27 AM
Thanks! Sure, go on and color it! I got held up with some modeling, so I won't have time to do it for a little while. I think adding a straw in his mouth would be great. I'll have to do that when I get the chance...

Alevice
04-17-2003, 09:39 PM
Well, i havent gopt enough time to work with it, but i will show you my current progress =)

http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://alevice.0catch.com/watercolor.jpg

As for now i think im done with the body (well, unless i wwant to change the tone of some eycandy stuff), and i started the... pit i think. I have just put some to another highlight, i have yet to put the shade levels and clearer highlights. I think the grass will be hard =P. I hope you like it :)

dprodr
04-17-2003, 11:21 PM
Really nice drawing man!!

I particularly like the use of line and the classical pose.

Works really well as a black and white line drawing.

Good stuff!:thumbsup:

Teyon
04-18-2003, 10:02 PM
Thanks, Dprodr and big thank you to Alevice for posting your colored WIP version! Looks like a nice start. I hope you get to finish it. Thanks again!

Alevice
04-19-2003, 08:38 PM
Thanks to you for the cool drawing :D :thumbsup:

freddy7133d
04-24-2003, 05:58 AM
well heres what I got so far.....:D

http://www.geocities.com/freddy7133d/well.html?1051157711905

Teyon
04-24-2003, 01:59 PM
Cool! The sky is a nice touch and the skin tone and well are really nicely done! Thanks.

I've started one myself (the link is in my sig).

freddy7133d
04-24-2003, 10:37 PM
thanks....

yours looks like its coming along nicely....the skin tone on your guy looks amazing....hope to see it finished.

:beer:

pestopedo
04-25-2003, 02:24 AM
Real Nice work. Good anatomy. Peace :)

Teyon
04-25-2003, 03:45 AM
Thanks you two! The pic colored pic will get an update this weekend, as I'm almost done with my current 3D project. Thanks again!

Alevice
04-26-2003, 04:59 PM
Sorry for all this delay.

I have got some progress.

http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://alevice.0catch.com/watercolor2.jpg

freddy7133d -Das cool

Teyon - That coloring is sweet

:thumbsup:

Alevice
04-26-2003, 08:12 PM
Lol, i am almost done. I hope you like it, Teyon:
http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://alevice.0catch.com/watercolor3.jpg

idvah
04-26-2003, 10:53 PM
he is really shiny, I do see a flaw in his left hand, fingers seem to short.

Alevice
04-26-2003, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by idvah
he is really shiny

I think you are right, i guyess i was thinking in a bronze god when i colored it. =P

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