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AkaRaven
10-31-2007, 12:26 PM
Another WIP, but in 2d section.. Trying to complete this image... Little stuck with anatomy and coloring
C&C really welcome and helpful
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2250/1807690049_09943b4234_b.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2102/1807689937_0d6f81f069_b.jpg

RicoD
10-31-2007, 09:56 PM
I'd change her hand first. I don't know which airbrush that is, but there's no regulator from the looks of it. She also isn't really holding the airbrush right.

Then I'd add some heavy wrinkling in her trousers near the pocket. Since her leg is raised and all the extra fabric that has to go somewhere. The places where you did put wrinkles on her right leg are looking a tad weird. I suggest you use some reference for that. And isn't the belt of the airtank a tad loose? I'd think it's meant to keep the tank from falling, but this way it lookslike the tank is floating.

There's also something with her torso which I find hard to explain. Maybe if you flip the image horizontally you can spot it right away.

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