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Fdv
10-29-2007, 11:37 AM
I'm currently working on my final project for my degree, a 3d animated short entitled The Delivery. I have created most of the assets and have begun animating, but before I get any further, I would like some feedback on the cameras and acting particularly, as I am not 100% happy with it at the moment.

The animation is still very much unfinished, and some of it is still at a very basic 1st pass level, but it should be enough to get an idea of the story.

http://hobo-art.com/movies/the%20delivery%20WIP.mov (Quicktime Sorensen 3, 16MB)

Oh and the purple thing on the box at the end is actually a sticker, that reads: Bombay via Anchorage.

cooperunionstud
11-08-2007, 02:37 AM
i like it so far. nicely done anamatic. I can imagine that you will add more detailed animation for the final. The timing of the shots in the beginning could be reconsidered, but i think anything said at this point is probably just pointing out the obvious. good job.

Fdv
11-10-2007, 05:25 AM
Yeah, thanks for the comments, most of the shots will be slightly reworked in the final, and yes, it's all basically unfinished at the moment.

http://hobo-art.com/Preview.jpg

I've started rendering some of the final animations, here is one of the shots...

http://hobo-art.com/movies/preview.mov

McJAKe
12-04-2007, 02:17 AM
Look forward to seeing the final film.
Did you sort out teh camera cuts around the "telephhone" ?

Eh?

Fdv
12-28-2007, 08:39 AM
Ok, I've finished the film, and have finally gotten around to posting it up here, so check it out!

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=154&t=577396

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