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Maya Ayanami
04-11-2003, 05:53 PM
This is my very first model and I want to know if it is any good for a first time


soo. tell me what you think.
And I'm sorry it is kinda big.

look at the corners of the mouth. I think that it looks kinda weird.
http://www.angelfire.com/magic/render/joan-head-subD-wire.JPG

http://www.angelfire.com/magic/render/joan-body-smooth.JPG
tyson12zoll
04-12-2003, 05:41 PM
Nice start. I would add more depth to the geometry on the eyes...but maybee thats what you were going for...
The sholders also look like they dont belong to the body, kinda like the arms were glued on. Check the anatomy of the deltiod in your drawing...it looks good there. As for the mouth, I dont think its bad at all...I cant really see how its comming together on the corner with the wireframe being in the way though. I would only suggest rounding out the upper lip in the middle a bit...looks kinda flat now.

These are just my visual observations. I really like the nose a lot
Maya Ayanami
04-12-2003, 09:51 PM
thank you for your comments.
Tom N.
04-12-2003, 11:43 PM
wow.. for a first model thats really good. My first model looked like a stick figure, and I especially like your models face. Good job so far!
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