Morod-Dur , Edwin Arellano (3D)

[Karkadan]

nice, but the castle looks flat, or too thin

[kOsMos3D]

I like it , good job. Very beautiful , lots of detail, good lighting, I like everything! :thumbsup:

[simonjaap]

I think youve done a beautiful job on the castle, but the surrounding looks like it needs way more tweeking, this is a nice piece but could be so much more.

The modeling and texturing on the castle is very nicely done. I like the german styled housing on top, even though i'm not sure if it would suit with the castle, it gives it a nice fairytale feeling.

For example, there would be a lot more trees/a forest surrounding the castle, as you have done some plantage in the foreground, but nothing more.
and even if you dont want to go for the forest look, the texturing on the rocks is too even over the picture, it needs variation.. at least a path to the entrance..

The tree next to the castle is imo way too big..

The person's clothing could quite a bit more transparancy, a better texture, i dont know what.. i am not a clothing expert, but they dont look convincing enough, this makes the person unbelievable.

I really like what you have got so far! Some more work on the other things than the castle and this could be an extraordinary piece!

great work, good luck.

[nedwin]

Thank you very much, for his commentaries and you criticize that of this one learns very much, with regard to the commentaries of "simonjaap", very guessed right and very interesting points of view before his critique, which I can say before this work, It is that was realized for the delivery of a challenger, always it is a time border of delivery and to me to try to have time to finish this work, sometimes it is necessary to look for alternatives and very rapid technologies and short ways to try to obtain better results, serious much better the image but sometimes not always it is had the available time, When one has responsibilities in a company je je je, with the way in the mountain of the castle really a better difference of planes marks it in the scene to be able to emphasize that the this person in the first plane and the castle on the second plane, but in the mountains I have used technologies of shaders and of displacement map, I have not shaped to hand the mountains, have allowed that the shaders should calculate the noise and volumes of the mountain, technologies of rapid result.

Scene Morod Dur Wire
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/296/index1uq8.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3594/indexwq1.jpg

I they leave a link the challenger of Castles in order that they observe the process of work in the time that even I could never come to the delivery of my participation but this one was my result:

WIPS Challenger-Process of the work (http://www.c4des.com/c4desforo/index.php?topic=5521.0)

Thank you very much for his observations are of very much value before my work to improve my technologies towards the future, Embraces :thumbsup:

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