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matmonkfish
10-25-2007, 03:18 PM
hello, please take a look

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7o7LcKaGHvY

all crits are welcome, thanks

SpiritPeddler
10-25-2007, 03:28 PM
Thats great man. i love the old flick of the wrist "girl that he loves" bit and the sniff.:applause:

are you planning on animating the Phonemes with it to?

cupojo
10-25-2007, 09:22 PM
looking like a really good start. do you have any plans to do any more work with the "girl"? It might be nice to have a bit more life in her then just eye blinks?

the turn toward the girl might be a little quick. Might need a few extra frames.

matmonkfish
10-26-2007, 12:44 PM
thanks for the comments, in respoinse to your questions, im not gonna have any phonemes, just the hinge jaw for now.

I would like to do more with the girl, for the competition hand in i wanna get the man as good as i can, hopefully i can then have time to take a look at the girl.

thanks!

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