Character: Fixed the face.

[zachgrachan]

looks better but:
noses get wider as you go from bridge to tip, mostly from the nostrils protruding.
jaw line looks like it is pulling down on the cheeks in a strange way.
eyebrows are usually (unless painted/drawn on) on the brow, not above it.

keep it up!

[MartinNH]

Hi Melicion, this is definetely an improvement! Theres still some pretty obvious errors though, which shouldnt be to difficult to fix. The nose is to long, look at yourself in a mirror and compare the lenght of the nose to the lenght from the tip of the nose to your chin. The mouth should be placed a little higher in the image. Keep working on this :)

[melicion]

Just a quick note... the eyebrows are like that because of the design... I might draw them on later or use paint effects. They are only there as a guide for now.

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