2D Still : Poster for a song [nudity]

[Goon]

Nekkid women are always welcome.
Sweet wings, not sure how they'd work for flying but i sure would like a pair. Especially if they came with her attached.

The left breast looks odd tho (its significantly higher than the other and the nipple is really far over) and the wings seem flat to the camera. The song is a bit hard to make out-is it Meteora? I'll leave the lenseflare for others.

[funnydoodle]

thanx for the first comment! for the breast, the left one looks higher cos we're dealing with perspective here. notice the shoulders and the line of action? i think it's ok....... wat does the others think...?

and from what i know, nipples are supposed to be pointing outwards- 45 degree left/right away from the neck. unless there's clothes to push them nearer to each other......

[zzacmann]

I agree. There are some unnatural perspective angles going on with the torso. You should not be able to see both the navel and crack at the same time. As for the color scheme and paint job, I think it looks great.

[zzacmann]

As for her right breast, I would suggest not connecting it with the left breast. In the pose shes in, her chest would be stretched, in effect, separating her beasts. I photoshoped what I mean below:

[funnydoodle]

actually, i tried standing up and pose her pose for myself. lol.... it's possible, so why not the crack and naval at the same time? go ahead, try posing as well! u'll see..... btw, nice mod with the breast...... thanx... i'll consider it.:thumbsup:

[funnydoodle]

updates: added black outlines for the pic and took away the pensil sketches...... so that it doesn't look dirty..... uhm.... colouring changes (minor minor ones....)

http://www.angelfire.com/un/kenimation/images/poster.03.jpg

[funnydoodle]

whoah.... no comments..... that's so uncool...... :(

anyway, here's an update:

http://www.angelfire.com/un/kenimation/images/poster.04.jpg

[Troub]

thats a nice progress, though i don't like lensflares very much.
but thats just subjective opinion.
keep up

[funnydoodle]

thanx troub! here's another update... i added shadows and more details to the wings..... please let me know if the shadows are logical... thats it for the mean time i guess..... more updates tomorrow.

http://www.angelfire.com/un/kenimation/images/poster.05.jpg

[bigbad]

Getting nice.


But fix the breast.

AND IN THE NAME OF ALL THE HOLY GRAPHICS, NO LENSFLARE.

:shame:
Lensflare effect is so the 90´s.

And there is something about the butt. Looks strange, can´t put my finger on it, but somethings wrong there.

Keep on the good work. :wip:

[Goon]

That would be the impossible hip rotation that your seeing. The belly is facing the same direction as the chest because of the belly button while the r butt cheek indicatest the hips being at 45 degrees or so to the chest. Also the top of the hip is way too high. There are several other anatomy errors but you can probably get away with them as style.

[funnydoodle]

hmmm makes sense...... is it able to cheat the eye? sort of optical illusion? hehe....... i hope yes,... hehe

[Kogepan]

You should really change the problem areas that have already been mentioned several times. You've been working everything except the quirks! :shame: Fix those breasts and hips and you'll have a nice piece.

[funnydoodle]

well i finally passed up my painting but still i think i should finish this digital piece.... so here we go again.....

here's an update.....

http://www.angelfire.com/un/kenimation/images/poster.06.jpg

[meheekano]

dude i thank you
for taking that flare out


i myself am a linkin park fan

[funnydoodle]

i think im pretty much finished now...... here's the final look..... u'll be seeing this in the finished work gallery shortly........ comments still welcomed...i know it sux but if there's anyone out here who wants it as a wallpaper, u can download them at my website at http://kenimation.cjb.net


http://www.angelfire.com/un/kenimation/images/session_800x600.jpg

[lmc]

Hey,meheekano here another linkinpark fans....hehe

Back to the thread, i can see u did a good job at the part of wings and bg but the lighting on the figure still .....can improve right!? :p

Anyway....just my personal comment, k!? :buttrock:

[blender]

Originally posted by zzacmann
As for her right breast, I would suggest not connecting it with the left breast. In the pose shes in, her chest would be stretched, in effect, separating her beasts. I photoshoped what I mean below:

he's absolutely right... i most definitely second that advise

[funnydoodle]

yeah i confess my mistake there... but its just too late for changes now.... i'm gonna let it pass... thanx tho....

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