3D Character - Bellae (headshot)

[3DKnight]

Shameless bump to battle the insane scroll rate of the board :p

[aylora]

I thought I would help you inte the battle ;)
I like her. Love the nose and mouth. But you could work a little more on the area above the eyes. It looks a bit to evil. Maybe you could soften them a bit....
You have done a great work!


___Ramona___

aylora@spray.se

[Goon]

Looks great. A real nice concept and an excellent transition to 3d. Really quite cute. Is it a child or just a very young looking female?

I only saw one flaw: lower left view, on the neck there is a strange disfiguration when transforming from jaw to neck.

after watching the turnaround i noticed another thing. her brow ridge extends all the way back to her ear. This looks odd and unless you wanted it that way would be a no-no.

[3DKnight]

Thanks for the feedback.. yeah the neck and jaw need some work.... going to start to body soon

Here's a sketch of her (http://www.bananablitzkrieg.com/images/ogs/bellaesketch01.jpg)

Here she is in a scene (http://www.bananablitzkrieg.com/images/ogs/the_duel.jpg)

the drawings arn't mine..( i wish though :) ) Doing the model for a friends project

She's about 19 or so... as you can see.. pretty stylized... large legs.

[Heimdall]

Hey,

My Grandfathers Eyebrows do that too.

-Clay:p

[aRTCy]

It looks pretty good. The only thing I'd like to suggest is if you want it to look more like your sketches, trying defining the lips a little more and her upper eyelid. Just a little. And be careful of the line forming between her brow and ear. Great start though!!

Richard

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