GP2 Formula Car, Rodny Mella (3D)

[Rabatscher]

Awesome lighting already!! I like it a lo!
Please try a motion blur on the wheels - nothing else to crit.

[TheRazorsEdge]

Very sweet work!:thumbsup:

I fully agree, I'd blurr or remove the thread/writing from the wheels to give sense of movement and speed! Right now it looks as if the car is parked for a promo shot.

[edcorusa]

I also agree about the motion blur. I would also suggest to make it a little grain to look like a high speed photo. Very goo work though. I realy live the modeling and texturing. Also very good work on the background and lighting. Well done.

[Tzrnutt]

Fantastic work. The paint seems a little over reflecive. Or at least there isn't enough dispursion in the reflections.

[prophecy313]

Very nice, i agree with the others. to me, it also seems kinda like its a miniature... not sure what you could do about that though, i have similar issues and have yet to work em out. 4 stars!

[gigsmella]

Thank you guys for advice and comments.

I am working on to improve those points. Here is another render with sponsor ads of my client. Since I've been doing this for long hours my eyes might overlooked and missed some other details, again advice and comments are welcome.

Cheers!
Rodny

[nielspet]

nice job on everything to do with modeling...

skidmarks on the road considering its a corner? with a little blur and you'll have one seriously well made photorealistic picture :) job well done

[LunchBox]

the left frontside wheel (from the drivers POV) is lifted off the ground, did you do this on purpose or is it a mis-alignment?

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