Character 2D:Passion

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[stephen2002]

looks excellent, however I don't see how so much blood could have been stuck onto a sword after extracting it from something. Also the blood looks a bit thin in parts.

The hair in your pics is amazing. Interesting composition.

[JonasNoell]

Do you have a "create awesome picture every couple of days" click-button included to your version of Photoshop??? :thumbsup:

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[Cronium]

It´s very nice! I especially like the anatomy!

There is one flaw that most of you drawings have; things that you chars are interacting with doesn´t get highlighted and shaded as the character itself. This make some things look flat and pasted resulting loose of depth. Besides that you make amazing art!

[Maria]

Thank you very much guys!
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[wildsheepchase]

Nice image, but I think certain parts of the painting don't hold up next to other parts. For instance, I think the body and hair of the girl are pretty good, but the sword, bikini, and skirt don't really blend with the girl. The sword and the bikini top look kind of flat to me....I think the hilt of the sword could use some shading and maybe even parts of the blade. The same goes for the bikini, throwing some cooler tones on her left side could help add some depth. The skirt seems to be painted in a completely different style from the rest of the figure...adding a few more hard edges would make all the difference I think.
I think it would also help to add a bit more depth to the background, possibly by making the gradient you've got going just a bit more pronounced.
I'm also not really reading where the sword is coming from. Is she supposed to be pulling it out of a wound or cutting her hand? Maybe that could be defined a bit more?
Great work though:D

[Maria]

Your comments usially inspire me to create new paintings!
Thanks!
To wildsheepchase:Thanks for your criticism! I`ll try to take your remarks into account!

[TonyMesiatowsky]

I like the cloth work,sword could use a little more blood though,but then again I'm morbid.Great Work:applause:

[PEN]

Beautiful work Maria.

[Royal]

Like how you did the cloth, the blood is really subpar when you compare. Why not try and render a whole character with the same style as the cloth? the face, body and bikini looks too much "photshop retouched" for my taste, but's that is of course just my taste :)

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