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tdp3d
10-14-2007, 10:45 PM
Hey guys, working on a new character animation for my reel, could really use some crits, Thanks!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=bPWO0xHfWUQ
CodeVeroby
10-15-2007, 05:36 AM
Looks ****ing amazing man !
tjc19999
10-15-2007, 11:39 PM
I think you need to overexaggerate more when he says "bro" otherwise it's splendid.


-TJ
acamporota
10-16-2007, 10:48 AM
hi...very good aniamtion....
the only critics i can do is about hand rotation....
for example...when arms move foward... the hand should stay behind for a wile....
in your animation the hand is too rigid...
i hope you understand and sorry for my bad english :)
tdp3d
10-23-2007, 07:58 PM
Ok guys here's the update. Added a hand gesture and polished a few other things up. Let me know what you think.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=qEygsVfWLLk
acamporota
10-24-2007, 08:53 AM
good work,the animation now work very well, but try to move a little bit the shoulder....

bye
MarkD
11-01-2007, 03:09 PM
Thats good stuff!
tdp3d
11-14-2007, 08:32 PM
Hey guys here's the update. I recently became a CGS Member so I uploaded the video to my page. Plays better than youtube. Any crits are welcome. Thanks!

http://tdp3d.cgsociety.org/gallery/561600/


(http://youtube.com/watch?v=1v5SxzVMjyk)
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