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tdp3d
10-14-2007, 11:45 PM
Hey guys, working on a new character animation for my reel, could really use some crits, Thanks!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=bPWO0xHfWUQ

CodeVeroby
10-15-2007, 06:36 AM
Looks ****ing amazing man !

tjc19999
10-16-2007, 12:39 AM
I think you need to overexaggerate more when he says "bro" otherwise it's splendid.


-TJ

acamporota
10-16-2007, 11:48 AM
hi...very good aniamtion....
the only critics i can do is about hand rotation....
for example...when arms move foward... the hand should stay behind for a wile....
in your animation the hand is too rigid...
i hope you understand and sorry for my bad english :)

tdp3d
10-23-2007, 08:58 PM
Ok guys here's the update. Added a hand gesture and polished a few other things up. Let me know what you think.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=qEygsVfWLLk

acamporota
10-24-2007, 09:53 AM
good work,the animation now work very well, but try to move a little bit the shoulder....

bye

MarkD
11-01-2007, 04:09 PM
Thats good stuff!

tdp3d
11-14-2007, 09:32 PM
Hey guys here's the update. I recently became a CGS Member so I uploaded the video to my page. Plays better than youtube. Any crits are welcome. Thanks!

http://tdp3d.cgsociety.org/gallery/561600/


(http://youtube.com/watch?v=1v5SxzVMjyk)

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