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serguineh
10-14-2007, 12:11 PM
Hi , this is an animation i've just done, any crits are welcome :)

http://www.vimeo.com/340792 (http://www.vimeo.com/340792)

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7528/befriendfd5.jpg

simonjaap
10-14-2007, 03:44 PM
"befriend not found" :(

serguineh
10-14-2007, 05:27 PM
sorry, the link works now.

ankheilw
10-15-2007, 05:58 PM
Hey serguineh,

The facial stuff looks really good. You should try to push the body motion a LOT more. I would have his hands clenched, his back arched, his whole body in a rage. Then, when he switches his stance and steps forward, keep him upright. That will help follow the VO and push the "acting" a bit more.

Good start.

tjc19999
10-16-2007, 12:37 AM
Hi serguineh,

I'm not very fond of your blendshapes. I would like to see the mouth open up more when he says "pompous" and "completely," but I believe your timing is spot on. Good job!

-TJ

serguineh
10-16-2007, 06:01 AM
Thank's ankheilw , tjc19999 for your critics now I realise what is missing.

serguineh
10-16-2007, 10:06 AM
I have pushed the acting a little bit and corrected the lipsync too. any other ideas don't hesitate.

http://www.vimeo.com/343464

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7528/befriendfd5.jpg

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