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schakaib
10-13-2007, 02:03 PM
Hello people!!

I am new to animation (esp., character animation). Please have a look at this small animation test, and give your valuable feedback.

http://www.vimeo.com/339702

Regards,
Shakaib.

RhettAllen
10-13-2007, 02:16 PM
Act it out yourself. Your character should look at the ball before it picks the ball up. Usually you would bend your back while bending your legs to pick something up. Your character seems to snap when it gets into standing pose and its legs are bent too much. At the bottom its center of gravity is too far forward, it would actually have fallen. Your knees generally tend to come into the chest than onto the floor when picking something up.

Good luck.

schakaib
10-13-2007, 02:53 PM
Thanks. I have already started workingon putting in the pointers you mentioned. I'll post the revised version as soon as i have completed it.

Head movement looks better now, but can you please tell me how to correct the "snap" in the legs??

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