character: Sara

[teknotek83]

very cool! folds are reallllllllllly nice! something about her lips and chin...kinda loook odd. but great job!

[nObedienz]

If I were you, I'd replace the background with something else..plain black or white maybe. Anyway, the drawing is fantastic, but as teknotek said, there's something wrong with her chin.

[RamboSambo]

i think the face needs more contrast(?):buttrock:

[Is-boset]

Thanks for everyone.

Teknotek83:
i really apreciate your sugestion, i'll try to make those changes.

nObedienz:
Well... i use the same backgruoud i the picture, cause i want to show those indirect ligths over the floor. but i make one.
thanks

RamboSambo:
you're rigth, looks little flat. thanks

I hope very soon show the changes. thanks to everyone

[Is-boset]

Hey it's me again, well it supousse that it's a finished work gallery. but i made some justified changes in mydraw i hope that the result could be more grateful.


http://www.telesat.com.co/raineiro/sara02.jpg

[Nightwing]

Really nice :)

I think her face could be a bit narrower in the mouth area, and the hair could use a bit of transparency at the ends (seems really dark there).

Like the cloth rendering V much and her skin tones are really good.

Good work!

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