vehicle: Race track

[flewp]

First and foremost, it looks way too cartoonish. Not sure if that was your intent.

The car model is just off. I won't get into specifics, because I'd end up writing a novel, but it looks like you're going for an Indy car type of model rather than Formula 1. Get some reference photos to look at.

As for the track itself, well, it needs a lot of work as well. I'm assuming it's a street course, but if it's not, remove the lane dividing lines. It looks like you sort of have grand stands in there, but they should be taller and "steeper".

Really, just look at a lot of reference pics, you'll see what needs work.

[Screwball]

nice,, too simple!
no?

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