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zhenyangjayson
10-06-2007, 10:05 PM
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Title: Yang Mi's Smile
Name: 黄震扬 Huang Zhenyang Jayson
Country: Singapore
Software: Photoshop

Hi.
I went to work on this imeediately after I finished my other piece titled "Familiar Girl".

I did it in 2 days. Used photoshop cs2 and wacom tablet.
I have noticed a slight improvement from my previous pieces and this is my 3rd finished piece sinc I got the wacome tablet.
Haha, I'm just a noob painter with no skills but filled with detemination and passion to learn art, thanx to Yang Mi who actually inspired me, in ways more than I can say.

Sorry about the minimal job on the clothing as I initially wanted to crop the face and hair but decided last minute not to. I wanna focus on her smile.

Comments and criticism will be greatly appreciated. I will be grateful and I thank you in advance. Thanx!
kenzi
10-07-2007, 05:15 AM
Your drawing looks fine.:)
Adding a little bit details on the body and the background would make it much better, dont you think?
Varges
10-07-2007, 08:58 AM
The expression of her face is very well done. I like the contrast in her eyes.
zhenyangjayson
10-07-2007, 09:35 AM
dinhviet: I agree. Haha, I'll definitely touch it up. Thanx for dropping by =)

Varges: Thank you! =)
vana
10-08-2007, 03:53 AM
well done !
her face is great ! You should just had a lil of red/pink on her cheeks , its a little too monochrome.
zhenyangjayson
10-08-2007, 05:36 AM
Thanx Vana! Yeah I agree, it will give the face more form =) Thanx!
woodbook
10-08-2007, 06:00 AM
good job,i do think you should add more details will be better
zhenyangjayson
10-08-2007, 07:28 AM
Thanx woodbook, do you like Yang Mi too? Haha. Thanx for the comment, I appreciate it and will work harder!
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