Any comments?

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Couple of things I'd change:
- The light from the top left looks out of place, like part of the house is missing. I know there could be some kind of atrium there but it doesn't seem to fit with the wooden ceiling. Something like that would fit better in a more modern house.
- This could be part of the lack of shadows but the left side of the room is almost as bright as the right side next to the open door.
- The light lacks colour. With a warm colour for the sun and a cool colour for the sky you'd expect there to be some colour variation. Usually with white where the two meet, depending on white balance.

Basically it could do with some contrast and less blown-out areas.

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