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Celshader
04-08-2003, 12:55 PM
Inked with a brush; lettered with a C5 pen nib; borders inked with a technical pen; gray tones and backgrounds added in Photoshop. Backgrounds rendered with LightWave 3D.

http://www.celshader.com/lore/panels/10_02.gif

http://www.celshader.com/lore/panels/10_09.gif

lindavanbruggen
04-08-2003, 01:25 PM
:eek: :wip: :cool:

Great comic style. I like it in gray tones!

What's the story about?

TheRow
04-08-2003, 04:06 PM
Hehe... well it looks really good... may whant to change the close up distant a bit more... "close up, extream close up, enviorment, half/full image"

page one could look like the following
1:st just as it is
2:nd OK
3:rd OK
4:th from waist and up.. also u might whant to ad some ?:marks and maybe a bubble or two saying something like what is he talking about. (I might have missenturept the meaning of the frame thou...)

2:nd page
well don't know excacly how to fix it but try changing the "camra angle" a bit from frame to frame like the change from frame 2 to 3
also in the next last frame ad something like a questin mark over "the guy with the cap" to make the quation expresion how to say.. ah missing a word here... point out more if u know what I mean.

and then to make up for all the bad things I have said.. the gray tones are superb, the char design is GREAT and it ain't like the small comics I have made where the charecters looks to be from totoly diffrent types of comics... they look a like so to say.

well hope it will give u some happy thoughts... even if i did make a lot of critics...

btw I can't spell so don't point that out.. thx...

Celshader
04-09-2003, 01:11 AM
Originally posted by lindavanbruggen
:eek: :wip: :cool:

Great comic style. I like it in gray tones!


Thanks! :)

Originally posted by lindavanbruggen
What's the story about?

It's about a shy telekinetic and the weird people who drift in and out of his life.

For what it's worth, I have more pages up here:
http://www.celshader.com/lore/panels/

Originally posted by The_Row

well hope it will give u some happy thoughts... even if i did make a lot of critics...

I appreciate the critiques. Thanks! :)

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