Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Boaz Yagozinski

[buzuba]

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Welcome to the under water fish restaurant & member club.
I'm practically tailoring the drawing as I go using illustrator (and long gazing on the screen :). I think the upper part of it will show a window to the bay and ... the down floor still needs more of strange behavior customers...

Please tell me what you think...
cheeers

[buzuba]

tell me what you think...
cheeers

[buzuba]

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/14081/14081_1192403852_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/14081/14081_1192403852_large.jpg)

Got tired of lines and wanted to see how it looks...
The story is still not finished (hopefully it will..)

Tell me what you think

[buzuba]

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I'll make some changes, but the concept of this strange place (people aliens and fish :) is out there

Hope you like it

[buzuba]

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MY RATIO FOR THIS DRAWING IS ABOUT 1:1.
The ratio on the guideline is 1:1.36 (3636x2657)

Is that mandatory??

- now let's think… where did I left my brushes? :)

[Jeffparadox]

MY RATIO FOR THIS DRAWING IS ABOUT 1:1.
The ratio on the guideline is 1:1.36 (3636x2657)

Is that mandatory??

Nope, It's the suggested minimum size you should be working with, not the suggested aspect ratio. If the edge of your square is 3636 pixels or bigger, then you are good...

Now, wow! That's a great drawing for sure, nothing to critique about it. Too bad it's a little late in the challenge, would've been fun to watch it evolve in a longer time. But, you know, miracles are possible :D

good luck and shalom!

[buzuba]

Hi Jeffparadox,



Thank for the quick reply and support

Glad you like the drawing ….



Yes, it looks like I don't have a chance (I still have to work, eat, sleep... :)
I just recently entered this site and competition ….so as you said.... miracles are possible :)

Thanks = "Toda"

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[buzuba]

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... warning !
Very Bright color here… so put your sun glasses :)

[Jeffparadox]

Holy wow! I guess miracles can happen. You're going fast, and don't stop. I'm curious if you'll take this coloring a step further, or will the whole piece look very illustrator-like as it does now.. keep it up!

[buzuba]

Thanks for writing; I guess you are one of my favorite viewers J

Yes, I gave it a try …I don't know if I'll have the time to take it a step further with the coloring …



Nice site, great job with the goose </SPAN>J

[buzuba]

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As the famous song goes:
"you have to move it, move it.... "

[DavidSmit]

Great work! I really like your style, keep it up!
I would focus on getting the main focus point in, or make that a bit more clear.

Cheers!
David

[Korendo]

Looks like a truly uplifting dinning experience, glad to see it in color, looks good. Minor comment, the greens are all concentrated in one area.

[buzuba]

I agree (>focus)

Hope it would be clearer at the end


thanks

[Jeffparadox]

Hey, nice progress! Colors are much more friendly to the eye now. I really like the atmosphere you're starting to capture here. I guess I agree with Korendo's and DavidSmit's minimal suggestions, other than that, keep on rocking!

Thanks for your kind comments to my entry, it's most appreciated. Toda raba :D

[buzuba]

THANKS, (hi Jeff, Korendo)



You're right; the green was just a 'color place holder' that got stuck J

I pushed away from it, and done some changes ….



Love your comments

[jocz]

Impressive colors and lines, gratz,
I've juste the impression that the left arm of the man in the foreground is in the other sens, like if the man was turning his back to the camera.

[buzuba]

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hope you like the changes...

[Jeffparadox]

oh wow, this is starting to get magical. You are doing great progress dude, don't stop! Now maybe you could work on getting some depth in that room to separate multiple grounds with lighting? Just an idea, waiting for more...

[na]

Hey! I love it it's really coming together and so much fun too!! :)

Good luck to you!

[buzuba]

Hi Jeff

Thanks for the notes ... it's all good and I defiantly want more depth in the scene...hope it will come together



Hi pearlyking, glad you like it, cheeers

[buzuba]

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THAT'S MY FINAL ...

C.U NEXT TIME

BUZUBA

[buzuba]

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THAT'S MY FINAL ...

C.U NEXT TIME

BUZUBA

[buzuba]

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THIS IS MY FINAL...

I guess the story is taking place in a weird tavern. The tables are space ships that fly around every 1000 years or so, but the exact date is always kept in secret.
Hints from the last "strange event" are all over the place- on the walls ornaments, in pictures….


C.U next time

BUZU ba

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