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gagn
04-07-2003, 04:56 PM
Hi everyone,

please give my your feedback on this character (itīs in progress!)

Questions for you:

What kind of things do you think she does?
What kind of attitude does she have, if any?
Does she evoke any other feelings in you? If good - how can they be strengthened? If bad - ... ah, you get the idea! :)

http://tempo.update.uu.se/~twq/mouse_1.jpg

/Gabriel

so_hi
04-07-2003, 05:09 PM
Gabriel:Not to descourage you but she dosen't look so much like a mouse to me. She looks more like a guinea pig. Maybe mice look different in Belgium.

Here is a pic of the way one looks to me, aint he cute!

http://ink.primate.wisc.edu/~assay/mouse.jpg

I think it has to do with proportion. Perhaps enlarge the ears or shrink the eyes. And soften the brows and revamp the nose.

Don't get me wrong it is a nice start. :thumbsup:

Good modeling to you.

E.

Raul-Reznek
04-07-2003, 06:33 PM
This is so cool!
I wonder why u didn't get more replies?!

Very interesting, maybe the eyes are a bit too big :D

ARTificial
04-08-2003, 09:32 AM
Looking good G!

Only things I have to remark on is that I think the nose area should be a bit more defined and that she looks a bit angry from the front.

Alltogether great work!!

rollmops
04-08-2003, 10:46 AM
Hi Gab!
It's a good start!
Looks like a very clean model.
Just a personal impression: isn't the neck a little too large?
keep on!:wavey:

gagn
04-08-2003, 01:46 PM
Okay, made some changes:

Smaller eyes, bigger ears, friendlier look, more definition on nose part, more slender neck ... But she has a big head and she needs a fat neck to support it!

http://tempo.update.uu.se/~twq/mouse_2.jpg

Braxton
04-08-2003, 01:47 PM
hey she is very cute :)

nice work, keep it up man!

cheers
Brax

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