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Hi everyone,
please give my your feedback on this character (itīs in progress!)
Questions for you:
What kind of things do you think she does?
What kind of attitude does she have, if any?
Does she evoke any other feelings in you? If good - how can they be strengthened? If bad - ... ah, you get the idea! :)
http://tempo.update.uu.se/~twq/mouse_1.jpg
/Gabriel
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so_hi
04-07-2003, 05:09 PM
Gabriel:Not to descourage you but she dosen't look so much like a mouse to me. She looks more like a guinea pig. Maybe mice look different in Belgium.
Here is a pic of the way one looks to me, aint he cute!
http://ink.primate.wisc.edu/~assay/mouse.jpg
I think it has to do with proportion. Perhaps enlarge the ears or shrink the eyes. And soften the brows and revamp the nose.
Don't get me wrong it is a nice start. :thumbsup:
Good modeling to you.
E.
Raul-Reznek
04-07-2003, 06:33 PM
This is so cool!
I wonder why u didn't get more replies?!
Very interesting, maybe the eyes are a bit too big :D
ARTificial
04-08-2003, 09:32 AM
Looking good G!
Only things I have to remark on is that I think the nose area should be a bit more defined and that she looks a bit angry from the front.
Alltogether great work!!
rollmops
04-08-2003, 10:46 AM
Hi Gab!
It's a good start!
Looks like a very clean model.
Just a personal impression: isn't the neck a little too large?
keep on!:wavey:
Okay, made some changes:
Smaller eyes, bigger ears, friendlier look, more definition on nose part, more slender neck ... But she has a big head and she needs a fat neck to support it!
http://tempo.update.uu.se/~twq/mouse_2.jpg
Braxton
04-08-2003, 01:47 PM
hey she is very cute :)
nice work, keep it up man!
cheers
Brax
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