Character: - female head -

[Edouard]

Nice work; but are you aiming for realism?

because it's incorrect at some places, but what the *** it's still a work in progress. Succes:wip:

[Edouard]

Do you use any reference material (photo's/drawings)?

[Willem]

yes i use photo refs,
and i know its not oke in some places, thats why i posted it here..

and yes i am going for realism.:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

Greetz Willem

[FrizzyCube]

Sweet! I really like how this is coming out. :)

I'm currently learning how to model and I'm making a female face too, so this is really interesting to me.

What are you using for render if you don't mind me asking?

[Willem]

FrizzyCube: I use Vray for render.
I will post a wireframe when the model is finished so you can see how its done..

For now a new update..
just tweeking the vertices..

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_04.jpg


Com'n guys and girlz some feedback!!!!!

Greetz Willem

[JasonA]

Looks like a good start, but keep working it. I'd make the chin wider and a more prominent jaw bone. Most women seem to have more width than your model. Also, increase the diameter of the neck too :)

http://www.fineart.sk/heads/SandraRef.jpg
or
http://www.fineart.sk/heads/Angelina_Jolie_-_Face_VS.jpg
and
http://www.celebrites-selection.com/photos2/traci_lords/traci60.jpg

[Willem]

thanks for the replies guys..

some updates..

please tell me what you think..

I think theres something weird but i dont know what??

Willem..

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_07.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_08.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_09.jpg

[Neox]

@JasonA these are some good refrences to look at, but for using em as a refrence guide on imageplanes or somehting, they are just crappy, these aren't true profiles, so a bad basis for modelling...

[Willem]

guess this is pointed at jason?

i have reference pictures so thats not the problem..

but i think there's something strange in her head. but ive looked to long on it so i dont see what..

thanks

Willem

[Neox]

yes this was for Jason :)

Ok her Neck is to thin, the sternomastoid (muscle from the ear to her clavicle)
The overall proportions are ok for a comic head, but if your pointing for realism, try to get a proportion guide for the head, the are a lot of small things that aren't that good
if youre pointing for a comic style, try to get a character for her, thats what i'm currently missing the most, she just looks "ordinary" nothing special, but a nice start! :thumbsup:

[Edouard]

There is something wrong with the upper Eye lid, it looks like it is half-closed. And work some little more on the nose and mouth. The ears are verry nice:thumbsup: , succes with your model

[Willem]

neox :thanks, thats something I can work on, and for the proportions, I guess something went wrong wen moving some vertices, i hided the planes with the model on so all that vertice work didn't look like the old model anymore. if you know what i mean..

will keep on working.

edouard thanks fixed that also, update will follow.


Willem

[Willem]

some updates..

what do you think.


Thanks
Willem

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_10.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_11.jpg

[Willem]

some updates!

tell me your oppinion!


Greetz
Willem



http://thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_12.jpg

http://thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_13.jpg

http://thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_14.jpg

[Aros]

The chin is too pointy.

Otherwise looking good :D

[Edouard]

There is something wrong with the upper-lip it got a little hole in it. work some more on the lips and you'll have a nice face.:wip:

[tyio]

i think the nose is too tall and too much right ! I see that only with the front view.

[olga8515]

Off topic: Guys how do you upload these huge pics? i mean the last time i uploaded a pic here, the limitation was 10 kb...And these ones are surely much bigger than that...can you advise any cites to upload pics?

[Willem]

Thank for the replies!!!

I will work on all those critics!!!

about the pics upload, i load them on our on server so i dont have any limits.

Willem

[Willem]

some updates,

tell me..

Willem

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_15.jpg

[Willem]

some more..

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_16.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_17.jpg

[Willem]

comments are welcome?!




http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_18.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_19.jpg

[Willem]

some corrections on the ears, not very pleased with them....


http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_20.jpg

[Willem]

more updates on the ear..

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_21.jpg

[cgwolf]

Looking better every post,

I would put much more work in on the ears, the size and modeling of them as they are now detract from the facial work.

[Willem]

Some updates what do you think?!

please guys don't just look, give me some comments..

Willem

[Willem]

and another angle

[eddy-3ddy]

some jaw corrections

one thing I should change...

it's also a meta. It's not clear what it is. A man or woman. But it has a (strak) sharp look.

:cool: :applause:

[lots]

it looks good.. but might i suggest that you reduce the forhead a little (maybe the whole top of the head)? it seems to be bluging out a bit much.. making her look a little alien-like

[gnarlycranium]

Jaw is way too pointy, dood. Think a bunch of people have mentioned that. Take a shot of it from almost directly below, and see what kind of triangle the chin and jaw make. It should be something like a 60 to 90 degree angle. If it's something sharp enough to stab somebody with, there's your problem.

[Willem]

Thanks for the replies guys....
but i dont exactly know what you mean with the jaw?

I tried to make it wider as you said but then she doesn't look pretty anymore?

can you give me more specific comments?

thanks.

Willem

[Willem]

see what i mean??

I dont think it s to pointy..???

Willem

[Edouard]

That's a better jaw already, but fix the upper lip it looks like it is filled with sillicon spay...lol

succes,
Edouard:p

[Willem]

ok. then after some tweekin'

what do you think?

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_24.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_25.jpg

[gnarlycranium]

Originally posted by Willem
see what i mean??

I dont think it s to pointy..???

Willem

Nono, don't push it DOWN or IN... the position of the chin is fine. Widen the jaw just behind the chin, and maybe a little at the very back where the corners of it are.

Take a look at this picture... http://www.fineart.sk/anatomy4artist38.jpg

I realize it's an image of a man's head, but female facial structure is only very very subtly different. All it would take to make that jaw feminine is to smooth out the corners on his chin a little to make it rounded-- the jaw can stay just the same.

Hope I'm making sense?

[Willem]

Gnarly Cranium : thanks for your critics, I've changed her jaw i guess....

some updates..

tell me what you think

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_26.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_27.jpg

[gf666]

hoi
ziet er goed uit. Maar zoals je zelf al zei dacht je dat er iets in het gezicht niet klopte. Niet dat ik een studie anatomie heb gehad maar ik denk dat de fout (nou ja, fout) rond de kaaklijn of kin zit. Misschien klopt de verhouding met het oor niet.

Maar nogmaals: ziet er zeer goed uit, wanna see more.. more..
:xtreme: :xtreme: :bowdown: :bowdown:

(Ga je het model ook nog verder uitbouwen/animeren?)

[Willem]

some updates..
tell me....:thumbsdow :thumbsup:

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_29.jpg

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_30.jpg

[Carina]

Hey Willem!

It's not a bad model at all, but i think the cheekbones are too pointy.. to angled.

If you look at the last untextured picture you posted, you can see that it doesn't look very natural.

Flesh it out a bit, and make the angle/tilt of it a bit less sharp

[Willem]

started "sort of over",
details of the mouth..

I am going to make all the parts seperate and add them together afterwards.

some suggestions will be helpfull.

thanks willem

http://www.thepharmacy-media.com/willem/render_lips_1.jpg

[tinitus]

nice beginning...keep it coming!

[eddy-3ddy]

just wondering how far you are now?

[Leviron]

The lips look strange.

The jpg explains what I want to say visually.

I have no idea how to do modelling but I just wanted to point out what I think as a woman.

What I think. (http://inspiron.bio-hazardous.com/crit.jpg)

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