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[Martyr]

Hi, its a cool head you have there i dont have any critics there some very good and accurate details... What or who its going to be? Continue!

[Fetus23]

hey manfred! you already know i'm liking this head :)...Just work on those eyes!! :wip: :wip: I really like the mouth and eye area's...good stuff!

:wavey:
fetus

[Tikisan]

:thumbsup: he's looking good..only thing i could crit is that his head looks a little on the thin side if he is supposed to be realistic, but could be just me

[JasonA]

Thats a great lookin head so far! very nice. That texture is looking like a pretty excellent start too btw. My only crit would be that the guys head seems too narrow.. its that third and fourth pic thats throwing me for a loop.

Still otherwise, its got alot of character already, an excellent sign of a good model:) nice work

[Rogosh]

I can't tell if it's just the view of the camera or the model, but the eyes look like they're positioned a bit high. Good job so far.

[SirManfred]

Rogosh: Yupp, its the perspective alright.

[slaughters]

Looks good. No crtiques on the model, but when texturing you need to add some slight spec/shine to the lips and oily parts of the face.

The ambient value of the eyes needs to be reduced as well. Right now they kind of look like they are glowing a little.

[Izu]

i think this model sux...i think it´s one of the crappyest models i´ve ever seen.....JUST JOKIN WID YA BUD...HAHAHA :beer: :beer: :beer:


it (rimes with sox), dude...yes it rox... :D u´r a real artist....i´ve never seen anyone better then u..at such a tender age....

i wish i had been this good when i was 12 years old...keep it up dude...i wanna see more postings from this wonderfull 12 year ol wiz with max...

[SirManfred]

Swirly-Chicken: Did you have me confused with Detonum? (Detonum is a 12 year old kid from Maxforums)
Anyways, LOL. You know aswell as i do that i am 19 *spal*
/me spals Swirly-Chicken around a bit with a large bag of vätsa

[Izu]

don´t try to act older then u are..i know that u´r 12..so there..shush.. :P

btw..told u ppl would reply to this...i told u it was a good model..damn it

[SirManfred]

Swirly-Chicken: I must punnish you with major SPALAGE! *SPAL*

[Ryder]

gulligt... :airguitar

[SirManfred]

Hi people.
I have been away from my computer pretty much. I will probably not be able to work on this head until early next week. Thanks for the replies so far. I would, however, like some more suggestions on how to make this as realistic as possible. Lighting, textureing, stuff like that. I want to keep this thread alive! Woo! :buttrock:

[Maximus Groff]

Hey kiddo, what software are u using ?
(heheh .. sorry i couldnt resist)

Very good.. do u have all maps ? (color, bump, specular for start)


:) you rock!

[leigh]

Coming along nicely, although I think the last render is waaayyy too dark :p
I think my main crit is that some of the details in your bump map are a little too bold - such as those wrinkles in between his eyebrows.
Something you might also want to work on are the eyeballs. They don't look wet enough, and you should add some vein details to them :)
Keep going :thumbsup:

[SirManfred]

Thank you Leigh! :)

Ok, so i DID get some time over this week to work on it :P
Thats just good, right? ;)

Here we go! An update!

http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/argh36b.jpg
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/argh37b.jpg

[SirManfred]

Uhm... is this really nesessary? *bump* :shrug:

[Goon]

?

...Ok. I'll just throw some fanfare your way to help you get this nice model finished. Its awesome. Looks nice all interstingly styled tho realistic. Textures look nice ( a little pasty on the forehead there tho and the lips are a bit flat) but its coming along very nicely and i cannot wait to see the whole thing and what its going to be used for.
Goodjob:thumbsup:

[JasonA]

the shader seems a bit on the waxy side, but overall I like the texture alot. I would make more apparent 'pores' on the nasal area. When I look at mine I see alot of em over the entire nose, whereas yours seems to be in a few patches. Maybe more 5 o'clock shadow would be appropriate for this guy. Hell its lookin pretty good :)

Are you going to do a body too?

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