A NEW EVOLUTION-short movie

[adib]

No replies:sad: Please any sugestions are welcome.Thanks!

[Darkflame]

Weird, but qutie excelently done.
Dunno why you havnt got more comments, the animation, morphs, lighting, textures are all pretty perfect from what I see.

Could I host a copy on my Stage6 channel? (if you got a better-then-you-tube quality version :p)

[adib]

Thanks Darkflame give me your mail and I send you a good quality avi.
thanks for the comments:)

[adib]

Maybe I explain how I did the modeling,rig,texture,comp and animation on this short.First of all,in the day I am on my job,after19 oclock I go home and I stay a while with my kids til 22 and at the end i start to work late at night 3 or 4 hours.In that time I have to manege the work and set all things to be optimise the scenes,the models to work faster on this.The concept is the hard part.When I finish the ideea I start to modeling.The rig for the transformation was also dificult to do.I modeled the egg and the bird,I setup the egg first,I did a check animation for the transform egg,after that I did the rig for the bird and at the end I did one rig including the bouth shapes.In one month I did all that and,BG,layout,animation,compositing,render and sound in the other month.So I finishit in two months.You must do alot in such a few hours.

If you have time look at the short,anyway you l find more in the CG Challenge Strange Behavior-Animation:
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=224&t=510670

[adib]

Comon people!Crit the short:sad:

[seZereth]

I think the textures of the birds could be improved, they looked a bit too plain, I love your "Ready to fly" pic, there the textures fit awesomely.
The rest is excelent.

[adib]

Thanks I know but I was concetrate on transformers thing and the mood.:buttrock:

[adib]

So no more critics:curious:

[adib]

some comments?:shrug:

[adib]

I put a new link with batter resolution,I think now is fine take a look


the link:

http://stage6.divx.com/user/Darkflame/video/1695436/A-NEW-EVOLUTION

[droidoz]

Hee dude, great idea, I really like the look of the big bird! The smaller ones could use better textures though. Transformations are very well done!
The most room for improvement is in your storytelling. Ill try to give some specifics. The point were you kinda lost me was probably when the music changed and the big bird apeared. To me it was unclear what you were trying to tell here. The slug joke thing in the end is also a bit vague to me. I dont completely understand what your point is. Are the birds going to eat it?
I hope my feedback is of any use, good luck with your next short and keep it up!

Edit: I just realized the still version of this short has been my desktop wallpaper for months a while ago... Great job on that too!

[adib]

Thanks droidoz,I did that short for Strange behavior Challenge and I think the ideea with the third egg to become an worm is strange right.A New Evolution,but with some strange action.Is made in just two months and I agree there some few things to fix in the story,but the main ideea is to have something strange.

Thanks again for the comments and advise:thumbsup:

[adib]

Other comments and sugestion?:sad:

[XepptizZ]

The first few seconds I like a lot, the scenery etc. But when the birds enter it starts to look very mediocre. Also, a lot more attention should be payed to the sound.The sound of the birds sound like some heavy forklift while the birds are hardly 10 inches tall. Also, it sounds very amateuristic how the sound doesn't seem to be in the scene at all and I don't mean how it sounds, but more how the sound doesn't "interact" with the enviroment at all. Also, the music which has create tension is faded very ugly and doesn't add to the tension at all other than making it stand out in a bad way. Though I agree that the idea is pretty nice. The wurm could have a little more emotion to it.

[adib]

Thanks for the crit and advise!:D Anyway if you like the ideea of the movie for me thats important:)

[adib]

no more comments:sad:

[cristis]

Fantastic ideea, godlike animation, unbeliveble story and gorgeous rig.No comments Adi...no more.

[adib]

Thanks cristis!

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