Dragonways, Ilker Serdar Yildiz (2D)

[CharReed]

The overall atmosphere of the piece is well done. I think the dragon, even though it is stylized, has some anatomical features that deter from it's believability. It has really huge feet, but it's legs don't look like it could even lift up one of those massive paws. I would suggest looking at the anatomy of a bat's wings (http://fireflyforest.net/images/firefly/2006/October/hummingbird-feeder-bat-1.jpg), since you are modeling the dragon's wings after them. The wings appear to be droopy and in flight, don't look like they would be able to support the dragon. The sneer on the dragon seems out of place, if that is the dragon's rider, the dragon appears overly aggressive toward her.

[Meld]

I like the colors and the atmosphere very much. And I also like the contrast between the angry mood of the dragon and the cool mood of the rider. Five Stars from me!

[VictorFornes]

its a really good piece this you have. The thing around is the problem at my point of view... the environment looks like unfinished... and that give a minus point.


As ilustration work better if is totally finished... as concept work perfect.

Hope this be helpful... cheers.

[Mitra]

ok
is perfeck:thumbsup:

[ilkerserdar]

Thanks for comments...

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