Scene: Starport

[dandavis]

http://www.renderosity.com/photos/GAL_200304/GalleryImage372423.jpg

Ok. I think I got this figured out. Thanks!

dano

[ALZHEM]

Hi Dandavis

I've been seeing the image and I'd want to tell something (please, don't kill me ;-))

1.- The light is very hard and dark. The raytraced shadows are well more or less, but I think that a GI real or simulated could improve the scene. This could add "life" to the shadows, because now they are too flat. Oh! And the light put it up to a 150%
2.- The robot's pose is very forced and not natural. Try changing this, rotating the feet out, and rotating the hip a little. The head is forced too
3.- the little robots are strange. They seems like floating. Change its position and rotate them. Now they are too symmetrical
4.- (the last) The colors are well, but the metal is not well achieve. Try with a highest specular percentage and more reflection

Try to correct this things and the image will be amazing

[dandavis]

Cool, thanks ALZHEM, don't worry, I won't kill you. ;) That's why I post here. To get some input on how to improve my renders. Thanks again!

[ALZHEM]

All here are for helping between us

I'll hope someday you'll criticize me :-)

[dandavis]

Thanks. I've updated the Leggybot a bit. Here's a shot.
http://www.renderosity.com/photos/GAL_200304/GalleryImage372657.jpg

[ALZHEM]

Great job :-)

The close image of the leggybot is very good. I like the shine very much

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