Character: Classic girl

[MetallDragon]

amanzing work:thumbsup:
Only on the Hands you should work a bit
(look at the 5th picture)

[jeb]

:buttrock:

this freaking rocks. this is one of the most beautiful faces i´ve seen. i totally picture her in a snk fight type of game.
my crits are the part where the arm bends look flat. the hads look ok in the first pictures, bu in the last on they do look weird. maybe is the hard light:shrug:

show the wire please.:drool:

[Sherif.Nagib]

Really nice..
yes the same notes..the hand & the hard lights.

[Spirit2029]

kewl kewl kewl, really like her look. I agree on the hands, and the light, but other then that maybey a little more texture, in the face and clothes...looks awesome though...

Spirit2029

[dbach]

I agree with the other posts, however I would like to go into a bit more detail, reffering mainly to the side by side shot you have posted of her. The shoulder deformation seems a little strange, in one picture the shoulders dip down and in the other they bulge up, also with the image on the right the right arm is curving in a way that is just not possible. Last thing in one of the other images you have a camera angle that lets us see up the arm and in doing so I can see that the hand isn't connected to any arm geometry, it would help this problem if you textured in where the glove ends and the arm begins, unless you plan on re-modeling the hands with some glove detail. I like the face closeups, nice work there, nice detail in the cloth, the big blue eyes are realy nice, a little tweeking of the lighting could make them realy stand out. Nice work and an interesting concept, I can see her on the bridge of a ship already.

Out,
Don

[unrealwarfare]

her hands are too big and appear to be "mutated??". you should spend more time on tweaking her hands. About her face - she turned out very pretty. Great job on the hair and the headpiece - great detail. The textures are really good too. Great job!

[amos_chid]

it's very slow to load
but i like her style :buttrock: :applause:

[TumikSmacker]

WOW!!! :scream:

[santiago]

that's loco man, very nice

[potion]

thanx eveyone
the hands was model before,so it looked like strange.:p
i will do it better next
thanx again:p

[Libor]

Nice character, potion!

Im really interested on which parts of the model you used simcloth and which where modeled by hand. Probably just the skirt. Am I right?

[Mr.Sanders]

really nice model, and pictures!
Specially like the close'ups. She is so lifelike and nicly lit. Hopefully u're doing a small anim or something. She deserves more than just these pics!
keep it up
:thumbsup:

[Widler]

Wow super great work!!
This looks like a doll my mom would have in her
living room, or even in a frame (not that anyone cares..sorry!)

But yeah awesome, although i would love to see the grainyness
of the render dissapear, not sure if that is just the file compression or what but it looks a bit fuzzy to me.

The only other crit i have is the forehead where the eyes meet,
looks like it bumps out too much in the pics where the hat isn't
covering it. Unless that is just the shadows playing tricks.

Ownage!

[ceql]

Nice!! Great to see it finished from the WIP, and nice renders :applause:

[M.Rogne]

Not much to put on that. It's nice, very nice :buttrock:

[potion]

itis just in wip yet.but i can't finish it so i over it.
because my pc can't render it in scene now.
i think if i do a new character i will do it better :scream:
anyway,it's my first total character ,so thanx eveyone hearten me.

btw: only skirt use simcolth3

[HapZungLam]

it looks pretty cool and stylize:thumbsup:

can i get a close up on the mouth corner wireframe?

[levin]

great great work... luv her doll-face... just needs some more details in the texture but otherwise excellent!

[potion]

here is the wireframe:
http://www.newcg.com/dv/uploadImages/20034816153229784.jpg
http://www.newcg.com/dv/uploadImages/20034816134945709.jpg

[Iysun]

awsome job, i love the style of her face!:applause:

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