Mr. BAD Guy .... comments

[kinston]

I have some problems with the eye's texturing... can someone teach me how to do a good eye texture...i m a maya user but i m using LW in this character.... i usually use nubs to do eyes in maya .... so how to do it in poly??... will it be a uv map ..??or??

thanks

[kinston]

below r some wire...
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/man02.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/man03.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/man1.jpg

[kinston]

no comment??? ... really need this to improve

[twitchy]

put a nice skin shader on it and fix the eyebrows.:bounce:

[kinston]

twitchy


thanks ur reply, but what will u use for the eyebrows, paint texture or really build it with poly??, and How to make a good one..?? do u hv any good tutorial about painting human textures in PS and i think i need a more details one...coz most of the tutorials r very short, and some r half finish or they already paint it on without showing whats the steps they do...i m just blur here, i know how to do in a MAYA ways with nurbs for the eyes, but i just cant figure out how it works on poly(LW).

[ckw01hk]

Hi kinston, here is me.

your 3D is great! well i am a maya user too and i don't know LW. sorry can't help.

but the skin surely needs more work. maybe u can draw more details on skin.

[kinston]

Hi ckw01hk :

Thanks , yup i m still doing the texture now..... thanks for ur reply...do post some 3d work here..... i m still learning in LW. Normally i ll use Maya....but the modelling tools in LW really great....try it.

[Shady_Lady]

The eye is the Spirit of character and I'm now still trying to explore .....I'm the Max user , haha, watery reflection, eyewhite tone and highlight on pupil is the key.......

as a character illustrator, you probably have good sense on human form, so not much to critic on model......:D

pls visit CGVisual or ChinaDV, this's my recent work.....

http://www.cgvisual.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=2147

http://www.chinadv.com/bbs/bbsindex.asp?bordid=1&id=393691

Maybe Later on CgTalk....bye!

:p

[jdevin]

Something seems off with the lower eyelid. Can't put my finger on what it is but seem wrong somehow. Other than that, I really like the concept, definitely shows your own style.

[PANZER]

.... ur eyebrows ... is it bumping inwards?... looks kinda inverted. . why not use maya hair?(altho im not using maya.) :) oh and yeah.. the skin can used some work.. try putting a specular map on it. it's lack of highlights. :)

[EnderW]

great work, but the skin I see a little it dries

perhaps it needs wrinkles, coverall in the lip (sorry for my English)

modeled the this good


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[essahc]

wow that's some chin you got there. I'd stear clear of this guy in an ally way.:eek:

[slaughters]

The specularity of the skin is too even. Try creating a spec map to make different parts shiner than othes to show place where the skin would be more oily or wetter.

The outside corners of the eyes seem to wrap around the side of the head.

Computer Arts has a pretty good tutorial on creating realistic 3D eyes:
http://www.computerarts.co.uk/tutorials/type/tutorial.asp?id=23082

[ComatoseWolf]

Nice work, your mesh looks great.

I think it does look kinda weird where the ear and the jawbone meet. Also i think the upper lip come down a bit to far. And this might just be me, but i think the cleft in his chin is a little too big, although it does make it look more cartoony if thats what your going for.

[efoo]

The character is good, just a comment on his eyebrow .... it could be belnd smoother, keep on improved and post it here!! ;)

[rrobert]

Uhm, his adamsapple is not entirely correct..
And where did you render it with? not to nice,
but model is ok :thumbsup:

[kinston]

Straightmark,slaughters,Ender W :

Hi , thanks ....the texture is just a 2 layer testing texture( just colour map and the same map for bump)...i m not doing the finally texture yet...i m doing the modelling of his body now....


PANZER, eric, jdevin ,ComatoseWolf



... thanks , for sure have to change the eye and eye brown..and after the body...i will put more details for the face ...then i will work on the texture again....thanks

[kinston]

Straightmark,slaughters,Ender W :

Hi , thanks ....the texture is just a 2 layer testing texture( just colour map and the same map for bump)...i m not doing the finally texture yet...i m doing the modelling of his body now....


PANZER, eric, jdevin ,ComatoseWolf :

.. thanks , for sure have to change the eye and eye brown..and after the body...i will put more details for the face ...then i will work on the texture again....thanks

[kinston]

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/bad01.jpg.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/bad02.jpg.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/bad03.jpg.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/artistconer/others/bad04.jpg.jpg

[kinston]

Hi ...take long time for this update..... bcoz work...hehe

Please give me some feeback...thanks alot

[kinston]

can someone help out about the mesh ...r they correct???....thanks alot...

[Shady_Lady]

From my humble opinion....:p

The proportion still need some works, the legs look good, the arm muscle seems too strong and the abdomen ...a little bit slim.(but it maybe the look you want...)

you may add some muscle around the abdomen. I'm not experienced in musclar male body building, so can't help on his mesh:shrug:

[PANZER]

i think the forearm is too short. and the abs are to flat...dunno just my opinion. :wavey:

[Psycho Ken]

They hav help me to give the comments. ;)
I'm not used to in software ke ke ke ke ke
i only can draw
Ken.03:beer:

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