CGTalk - Model: Elf Face

christiner

04-04-2003, 06:13 AM

This is one of my first human models. I used reference of course i still have lots too do so i would like some critque. I'm planning to do a whole body too. Thank you ! :)

http://www.vfs.com/~christiner/faceelf.jpg

criscoon

04-04-2003, 06:30 AM

Good start christine. i love the ears and face. some of the proportions are a bit of like the side width of the head and the size and shape of the neck but overall a good start get that head finished cause i want to seeeeee it all together!

gnarlycranium

04-04-2003, 02:42 PM

Proportions seem good-- I like that nose, and the profile looks good.

Problem: I'm seeing all kinds of funky bumps and lumps and ridges all over the place. Looks like your mesh is all screwy... post a wire?

DDS

04-04-2003, 02:51 PM

i agree.

The model is very good, but lots of irregular things there at the eye-side. Make geometry more regular. Maybe the side is too long, but not sure...

Good luck, post more updates!

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