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rampas
09-14-2007, 03:58 AM
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Title: Big truck
Name: Daniel Lobo
Country: Brazil
Software: Maya, mental ray, Photoshop

First automobile model, got lazy and decided to move on, at least for now.

Tips and commentaries are welcome!
moronart
09-14-2007, 11:24 AM
one thing i have to say is that you should increase the samples-per-ray (in the rendering settings) number, now there are kinda 'strokes' around the truck.
no crits about the model, keep it up!
dEDa
09-15-2007, 08:58 AM
Nice model!
Maybe you could turn on the orange lights on the sides, and also the front lights.
The windows material is a little dark, you could increase the light intensity of the HDRI, or add some more light around or inside the cab. What about th tires? If you have made a nice displacement map on them it should be nice show them better.
Good work,
dEDa
dEDa
09-15-2007, 09:02 AM
Nice model!
Maybe you could turn on the orange lights on the sides, and also the front lights.
The windows material is a little dark, you could increase the light intensity of the HDRI, or add some more light around or inside the cab. What about th tires? If you have made a nice displacement map on them it should be nice show them better.
Good work,
dEDa

Hey... I've never quoted myself ;)

I've seen now your other render of the truck with the environment, the lights and everything, that's really good!! :thumbsup:

dEDa
rampas
09-15-2007, 02:35 PM
Hey... I've never quoted myself ;)

I've seen now your other render of the truck with the environment, the lights and everything, that's really good!! :thumbsup:

dEDa

Thanks dEDa, you really got a point there about the tires, I modelled them and they donīt appear! About the interior of the cab.. I got lazy, there is no interior, thatīs why the windows are dark! hehe ;D
rnd2k
10-01-2007, 11:41 PM
ugly and unaccurate model
rampas
10-02-2007, 12:21 AM
ugly and unaccurate model
as I said in the post, itīs my first automobile model, I wasnīt trying to do it 100% accurate, did it to practice, as I started using 3d applications 4 months ago..
Posted the image to get tips from pros, but thanks for the opinion...
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