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[Martyr]

Hi, you have a beutiful girl there...I have some point that you may correct first maybe you render is not the final one but the eyes are too shiny or reflective, her earshave some problem i thinks try to tweak it a little bit, maybe your collarbone is a little off but im not sure...Instead of this you have a great model especially the clothing who is truly great and the hair is good too... Continue:buttrock:

[ill_logic]

not bad...
it's gotta halfway madonna thing going on in the face and the rest of it looks like rikku from ffx(2). i'd try to give the hair a bit more volume though... it looks kinda flat

other than that... nice!

:surprised -ill

[Seg]

Thanks for the comment, for the neck I think it's because hair are missing.... and for the inspiration it's Final Fantasy X ...
No other comments or suggestions?

[Iysun]

looks great, the tummy seems a bit odd to me tho, needs more details, and the bottom curve of the tummy ends lower then you have it there, other then that its very well done i think

gj! :applause:

[tomG]

great character!! the clothing is so cool. i fully agree with Martyyr25 ..... you have to correct the earshave, and for me the nose looks a bit to thin and the nosewings somehow to broad.

Just 1 critique to the clothing ..... take another material for the shoes. the clothing looks like a girl from the middle ages, but the shoes looks like plastic (too spacy)

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