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Paul-Francis
09-08-2007, 08:10 AM
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Title: Stardust
Name: Paul Francis
Country: United Kingdom
Software: Photoshop, Poser

Re-learning about graphic design, layout and lettering - trying to make some practical use out of Poser and Photoshop CS2.

Thans for taking the time to view/critique.
joebattleartist
11-09-2007, 10:48 PM
Your work on this piece displays your talents well.
The overall composition is reminiscent of Alphonse Mucha.
I love the way her feet and shadow revel her as a 3d figure against a 2d background.
The the composition built on bluish tones give this render a unique feel.
Terrific use of white light.
You have taken a stock Poser figure and made her your own by giving her a unique expression and a placement within your particular artistic vision.
Great balance and harmony of design elements.

Please show us more of your work.

Joe
luckbat
11-09-2007, 11:34 PM
I agree that the lighting/color makes for an appealing composition, but I'd expect the woman's hips to be pivoting somewhat if her feet are positioned like that. Right now the hips' rotation appears to be locked at 0,0,0.

Really, the whole upper body could use some subtle asymmetry--it helps reduce the CGI "T-pose" effect.
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