The veteran, Corentin CHEVANNE (2D)

[ElectroNico]

Très sympa ton personnage ! Le design, la pose, le visage sont vraiment bien. J'aime également beaucoup les couleurs utilisées, je trouve qu'il se dégage de l'image un sentiment de force et de sérénité.

[Samuraikuroi]

Very nice details & and great pose. Travail gentil.

[naetronic]

Slick and polished rendering you've got going! However the character appears a bit flat against the broad range of values you've used for tha background and he doesn't seem like he belongs. More integration between the two is needed to escape that computery-cut and paste feeling. The background figures either need more definition, as they are almost as close to the viewers eye as the main figure, or add more distance between the background and the foreground and make your bg figures much smaller. Another option might be to lose the figures in the background altogether. Just my two cents. Very cool piece regardless!

[starmsa]

This looks like a video game or comic book in the making.

[core35]

Thanks Neatron, you're completely right. I started this drawing like a character design, and when i've finished it , i tried to make a background before post it . So i "computery-cut and paste" it on the backround . Good looking! So i tried some different thing to restore this piece in a chara-design way, probably with a simpler bg and low range color.
Perhaps like this
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8054/veteransolo02ns5.th.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=veteransolo02ns5.jpg)

or like this
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2928/veteransolo01bk8.th.jpg (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=veteransolo01bk8.jpg)


Thanks for the advice!

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