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gaetano125
04-09-2002, 03:45 AM
Here's a link to my beast. I'm retarded, and can't seem to get it to show in the post...

gaetano125
04-09-2002, 03:47 AM
Heh heh. Would probably help if I actually POSTED the link, eh?
http://www.geocities.com/gaetano125/beast.html

staglider2
04-09-2002, 06:27 AM
Not bad ! You seem to have some sense of anatomy, but :
The pointing arm is too short, and don't go back and forth too much with your pen or pencil within the same line segment, it gives nasty, sharp line artifacts, try to outline the edge lines of the body shapes in as few movements as possible. Think This way : how can i go from this point to the next in only one stroke. Try to hold on to that thought and your hand will force itself to "find" to most optimal path for your stroke.

gaetano125
04-09-2002, 08:11 AM
Heh heh heh. No news to me. I've had single-line issues since I first started drawing. Thanks for the critique!

Vinsoviet
04-09-2002, 07:57 PM
Color it fool! Heh heh. Whats up man. Stayin busy?

gaetano125
04-11-2002, 05:44 AM
You know it. By the way, nothing fer sure, yet, but I might just be moving over there. Heh heh. Anyways, here's another smoother one. Vinsoviet's already seen it, though.

http://www.geocities.com/gaetano125/girl.html

I might give coloring the beast a shot later...

gaetano125
04-11-2002, 06:04 AM
If the shading looks a little odd, it's because I mistakenly tried to create half a dozen different shades with one crappy pencil. Heh heh.

Franz-dp
04-12-2002, 01:08 AM
please don't use lined paper
(per favore non usare carta a righe!) :(

gaetano125
04-12-2002, 07:58 AM
Heh heh heh. No kidding. Unfortunately, it's usually all I've got on me when I feel like drawing! I'll have to look into getting a sketchpad of sorts...:p

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