WIP: scene : for book cover

[entenweich]

a bit too dark, it's hard to catch the details... you really should light up the image.

[robo3687]

yeh the lighting is a bit crap...........

i used the E-light MAXscript for the lighting, so it just did some GI.....I'll whack some extra lights in for the next render i do.....see how that comes out

i'll try and get that render up soon

[osukayasuragi]

adjust the lighting :hmm: and you might want better shadows because it looks like the objects are floating...

[robo3687]

And I'm back..........with hell better lighting than before.........more little nick-nacks and a wall....dum dum dum........

i'm thinking of expanding this to a whole room and having volume lighting streaming through the window.........i guess i'll look into that later
http://www.angelfire.com/pro/robo_obi/test7.jpg

[Troub]

this is coming out nicely.
i think the strong shadows that come from the interior lightsource must be lowered in case there is coming sunlight from outsight.
wanna see textures :beer:
keep up

[YankyBJeans]

Looks like its going along the right path here but i have some small crits:

1-the light behind the camera is conflicting with the light coming through the window. I think the scene would look better with the main light being the window light and then some smaller fill lights for a little enhancement.

2-the headphone cord is waaaaaaay too short. lengthen that baby up a bit

the scene seems to be coming along. keep it up!

Yanky

[robo3687]

thanx guys.....

i'm not too crash hot on the texturing part though.......

but just for fun i did up a cell shaded one.....:thumbsup:
http://www.angelfire.com/pro/robo_obi/celltest.jpg
i am thinking of just applying bump maps to the objects but leaving them B & W...to give a different sort of feel to it....

but you never know.......i may do something alltogether different

[robo3687]

updated....with no lighting fix but a bump map added to the table.......there is actually one on the wall butr it ain't showing up

http://www.angelfire.com/pro/robo_obi/test8.jpg

[robo3687]

more progress........more of the room..........and a bed.......

the detail has been lost for the desk but i'll fix that later........ it may seem boring again.......but........meh.........it won't be when i'm finished ;)........

the texture on that left side wall is wrong.....so don't worry about that.............and i don't think the table came out right either.......

so yeh....here it is

http://www.angelfire.com/pro/robo_obi/test9.jpg

[robo3687]

Ok.....now the pic has a roof........moulding around the roof....a bookcase...curtains.......a redesigned window.....still has that levitating table though.....

http://www.angelfire.com/pro/robo_obi/test10.jpg

[robo3687]

shamless bump:rolleyes: just looking for some comments

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