Character: Songbolt

[Cooper]

Bah, that pic is really really crappy. please visit my site to see him better.

Thanks.

-Cooper

[Darius43321]

you can post the image itsself here not using the upload here just use the IMG command in your post mmk?

i'll crit then

[Cooper]

anybody got any advice on making a nice pic but still keep it at 20k bytes?

[BiTMAP]

you don't upload it, you link to it, you put the address to the image inside [img] tags and then the picture apears.

[Cooper]

Sweet thanks.
http://www.rlcooper.com/files/SongBoltPartical.jpg

[Cooper]

http://www.rlcooper.com/files/SongBoltFrontCloseUp.jpg

[l_farley13_l]

lookin really cool - love the belts and stuff!

The arm on the right looks odd though, it's just not well defined under the cloth so it's hard to tell the posture, making it look awkward. It's hard to define it under cloth (esp the leathery stuff it looks like your using)

The feet too lack a bit of personality, look at your own feet they look great! They have a good mass, roundness, and over all appeal, plus they probably look larger than this guys!

The hand looks good, the vertical position is very geometric, but the head tilt etc. kinda clashes, so either a kinda geometric compostion or an orginic one might work.

And do with it what you may! I always like to err on more critism even if it's personal than less. :)

Farley13

[Cooper]

Thanks, I'll look ins to that=):bounce:

[BiTMAP]

love teh particles.

[erik2003]

Man i visited your site and you work at ridiculous speed with so much detail in so little time...

Impressive :eek:

[Darius43321]

Good job man..i like your machine gun guy better tho

[Cooper]

Thanks, Yes well i HAD to work at a fast pace because i was under pressure=) Thanks though;)

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