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mharris
08-28-2007, 02:10 AM
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Title: Night Scene Sinaran TTDI Condominium
Name: muhamad harris nasril
Country: Malaysia
Software: 3ds max, finalRender, Photoshop

It has been long time that i did'nt do night scene, as far as i can remember is it was 3 years ago.
BTW, for this visual it is a condominium built at the centre of Taman Tun Dr Ismail, Kuala Lumpur. Nearby also a newly built condo done by Ken Yeang architect.
Rendering done at a2 300 dpi size -14 hours.
Reflection and lighting is rendered in onother pass to touch up later in photoshop. night hdri used in skylight to create night ambient. Trees from archmodel , people from dosch and cars from marlin traffic.

ok..if you guys have a crits or comments, please do so. i need it to improve my night scene rendering.
see ya!

harris
http://tukang3d.blogspot.com
rockmetalray
08-28-2007, 12:30 PM
Looks good!strong lighting and the inside details are awesome! Very cool work, indeed.
The building looks very smooth. A great view from the top there, i reckon.

i'd go for more yellowish lighting on the top as u have on the bottom, though.

I think the texture of the low front building is too vague. also it looks maybe empty compared to the rest.

Trees are very repeated, i suggest some different sizes and rotate them.
the background pic looks a bit too blured and darkened to me.

some knitpickin here from me:
a bit off but I like the parking lot on the groundfloor, but i think some of the forgroundcars kinda lacks light/shadows... specially on the right..also i'd tuned down the flashy road colors abit.

the "ufo beams" on the sides doesnt work IMO. looks kinda fake northern lights..
not to be harsh but thats my first thoughts..the pic is good,but i think this would be a clear 4* if it werent for those minor things..

3 * from me
mharris
08-28-2007, 12:46 PM
Looks good!strong lighting and the inside details are awesome! Very cool work, indeed.
The building looks very smooth. A great view from the top there, i reckon.

i'd go for more yellowish lighting on the top as u have on the bottom, though.

I think the texture of the low front building is too vague. also it looks maybe empty compared to the rest.

Trees are very repeated, i suggest some different sizes and rotate them.
the background pic looks a bit too blured and darkened to me.

some knitpickin here from me:
a bit off but I like the parking lot on the groundfloor, but i think some of the forgroundcars kinda lacks light/shadows... specially on the right..also i'd tuned down the flashy road colors abit.

the "ufo beams" on the sides doesnt work IMO. looks kinda fake northern lights..
not to be harsh but thats my first thoughts..the pic is good,but i think this would be a clear 4* if it werent for those minor things..

3 * from me

thank you sooooo much for that critism. very informative. i really need it to improve.

thanks
harris
http://tukang3d.blogspot.com
Javyyao
08-28-2007, 01:00 PM
good!I like your job very much. Come on!
http://javyyao.cgsociety.org/gallery/
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