Character: semi goth girl

[nanabaky]

well, excellant modeling, she has a very piercing glance, very nice eyes (soon a finish work isn't it ?)

[CGmonkey]

Love it mate!! :applause:

Nice render and nice lips!! :)

[luigi]

wow :beer:

very good model

but isnt the iris to small?

i post and image for you see what im saying


http://perso.wanadoo.es/calizp/remake.jpg

[eugene_fraxby]

im in love.......

post some anims!

excelent stuff!

love the other render on (goth_test2)

grrrrrrrrrrowwllllll.....:eek: :drool: :love:

[ceql]

looks great! :applause:

however, I agree with luigi's suggestions ;)

[Edouard]

Nice work, I really like the girl:love:

[mattiasa]

She looks great, a little bit like posh spice, if she was more into goth

[betelgeuse]

Very nice work. Just out of curiosity, though, I was wondering why her top (which appears to be a leather material) casts a shadow with a ragged edge. The cast shadow implies a furry type material.

[Werner]

luigi : you are absolutely right...I'll make the iris bigger. :buttrock:

eugene_fraxby: thanks budd, I'll post some animations soon. I'm very happy with the way the hair moves at the moment.

betelgeuse : the ragged edge shadow is because of low shadow detail. I usually keep these settings low until the end render...or change shadowmaps to area lights with raytracing.

[T0BER]

Very nice!

Is it just me or does the mascara make her right eye look bigger than the left? :hmm:

[Nimue]

Very nice, my only crit would be the hair and the eyebrows. The hair doesnt seem to have much definition. maybe you wanted it flat? the eyebrows are really big and in the middle by the nose they should feather off a little bit. just my opinion though. i like the detail in the face though

[lerpiedood]

Great work! I'd love to see some more renders and maybe a wire. Keep up the superb work!

[Chaos Maximus]

hey, like it a lot, you probably should look at the face color and sholder color, the difference makes it look like her head is floating.

[Werner]

thanks for all the replies...I'll look into all your suggestions.

here are a couple of renders...please remember that this is work in progress, and I really appreciate all your comments.
They are a bit dark...will fix that soon

girl 1 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl1.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2UhH1049269590r/ziemdesign/images/G-girl1.jpg

girl 2 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl2.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2PeG1049269625t/ziemdesign/images/G-girl2.jpg

girl 3 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl3.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2TiG1049269642m/ziemdesign/images/G-girl3.jpg

animation test :
hair test (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/hair_test2.avi)

[eugene_fraxby]

OMFG!!!!!!
beautifull, you made my ideal woman.......
ever thought of going into genetics?

and they're NOT too dark!

great stuff

[tzmtn2]

i realy edmire ur work and like ur style :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
u really did a nice work with the skin textur
i think u should work a bit more on her hair textur
to give it some shine

i cant download ur animation
can u fix it and upload a wireframe??
and wich program r u using?

and what about the whole legs..?

by the way i think u should work some more on the nose

[Werner]

eugene_fraxby : Thanks buddy! glad you like her. I'll show more soon.

tzmtn2 : Thanks...I'll work more on the hair texture. I havn't tweeked this yet...will update soon.
Please explain about the nose...what should I change?
Click on the animation link. Once the download popup comes up, just right click and save as...it works fine from here.

I'm using Lightwave 7.5.

[tzmtn2]

it looks like the edges ive marked below needs to be worked on
to become smoother...
+ i've noticed u've replaced the lips textur
i liked the old one
and u didn answere me about wich program r u using?

[Edouard]

Can I see some wires....:love:

[ijinn]

very nice.. and wires plz. :))

[E_Moelzer]

Very Cute!
CU
Elmar

[Werner]

Originally posted by tzmtn2
it looks like the edges ive marked below needs to be worked on
to become smoother...
+ i've noticed u've replaced the lips textur
i liked the old one
and u didn answere me about wich program r u using?

Ok, I'll work on the nose area as well. Thanks.

I gave you the answer in my previous post...Lightwave 7.5 :surprised

I'll post some wireframes soon. Thanks again:thumbsup:

[BluesManJF]

simply amazing!
it´s perfect!
we hope you post the wires!:rolleyes:

[ivanimal]

I'm impressed, I'm in love,............................. I'm jealouse!!!!!
Keep on rockin'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[luigi]

:applause:

dificult to say more critics I think too that the hair is to dark make it less black an play with the specular .

The character is super and i like a lot the piece of cloth and the texture of it.

waiting wires.


are you rendering with hdri ? :cool:

i think if yu put a light back the girl will help you to see better the siluete of the character

[slaughters]

Very nice modeling, lighting and texturing so far. I love the look of the girl so far.

My comments would be that maybe the lip bump map is a little too deep. It's hard to say, because it looks OK in the mid range shots, but too pronounced in the close ups.

Another thing I noticed is that the skin has all the same level of shine. You may want to use a spec/shine map to limit the shininess to specific spots on the face and body. Maybe add a little noise to it as well.

A texturing thought you may want to try is to have a faint line of freckles trail down her chest. Simular to the feckles you have placed on her nose. Most people who are freckled do not just have it limited to their nose and cheaks.

[Werner]

some cool replies! Thanks guys.

luigi : I'm not using HDRI (or GI) in this scene. I might use it later once I'm done.
I acctualy had a back or rim light in the scene...forgot to activate it. I will update soon


slaughters: I'll look into the lip bump texture...not sure if I'm going to get that close in the final shot with the camera...I might change it tho
The freckles on her chest idea is cool! Thanks I'll definitely do that.



:bounce: :beer:

[Grub]

Well, she looks fabulous, a nice but dark pin-up girl.:xtreme: I think the lips are a bit wrinkly though, you can give her a smoother pout :thumbsup:

[Werner]

well, here is a small update...I made the hair a bit more specular, and more brown. Let me know what you think.

IMAGE 1 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl4.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2XhH1049358844p/ziemdesign/images/G-girl4.jpg

IMAGE 2 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl5.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2YdF1049358862t/ziemdesign/images/G-girl5.jpg

[m-greenwood]

Excellent.
I really like the bottom pose, shows a lot of attitude.
Nice work!

[BluesManJF]

Originally posted by Werner
well, here is a small update...I made the hair a bit more specular, and more brown. Let me know what you think.

IMAGE 1 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl4.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2XhH1049358844p/ziemdesign/images/G-girl4.jpg

IMAGE 2 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/G-girl5.jpg)
http://www.3dluvr.com/2YdF1049358862t/ziemdesign/images/G-girl5.jpg
hey!
it´s really better now!
i thikg you´re in the point!

[Edouard]

I like the image, but I wached the movie and the hair test, the hair is to heavy try to change it and your animation will be as good as your stills. can we see the wires please:rolleyes:

I like that girl:love: :drool: does she has a phone number:D

[FallenSwordsman]

Great work Werner - I loved your previous goth girl - this one is just as good if not better. Is it the same basic model here that you've used?

[r0bal]

She's very nice :)
I like the model a lot although you could improve two things:
1. The ear is to flat and not detailed (from what I can notice)
2. The hair goes through the ear

[Stepunk]

:drool: :drool: :eek: :love:

I love her! :)
She seems my girlfriend :) :airguitar :buttrock:

[Nimue]

Very nice job:thumbsup:

[slaughters]

I think I like the original lighting a little better. I think that dark, high contrast shadows fit the character of a "goth"ish girl a little better than the paler, more difuse shadows and lighting in this last image.

[nObedienz]

really nice so far :)
only crit i got, would be the hair..
It looks too static

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