Environment: Factory at Sunset

[Gatling]

I can't imagine why you've got no other replies.

Great work :D

Some crits (If you don't want any, what's the point of posting?):
1. Round out those pipe corners- some look very rough.
2. On the last pic ,at the bottom of it, you have one pipe with many "holsters" (forgot word, maybe braces?) for it.

Ex: ==================
.. ..... | | | | | | | | | | | |

Try to vary it, and come up with something more random ;)
In fantasy environments (anything other than a replica) try to have a little fun and change things around.

Love the backdrop though, really class :beer:

[Angelus26]

Looks good, I'd add some atmospherics perhaps to the second image, maybe some minor haze/fog effect. I don't trust air I can't see;)

[Maya Ayanami]

nice.
if there were some grunge maps all over it would be much better.

[BRB]

thanx for your comments guys! i should really work on making it more dirty. Gatling, i will certainly take your advice, and Angelus26, i am working on the atmospheric effects now, like smoke and other things i'll try out with particles and compositing. thanx guys!:thumbsup:

[wayfaerer]

very impressive, not much to criticise. A bit of decay would look good, though

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