Still Life: Logitech MX500 comp

[Maya Ayanami]

it is good.
you need to fix the bump around the lable. isn't there supposed to be a bit of a dip between the top of the lable and the rest of the mouse.

[wedge]

uhhh.... wireframe please?

[Matt]

Originally posted by wgeddes
uhhh.... wireframe please?

Why would you ask for a wireframe when it doesn't look real at all?

I use an mx500, and this render looks completely flat, no offense. Try harder.

[Mikademius]

I am stroking my hand on one of these all day long and I noticed a couple of things:

The section with the wheel and cruisebuttons is too wide, the logo is rounder, more oval. The gripsupport for your thumb also har a bit too hard edges. The material on the mousebuttons (the grey) has a very noisy appearance. If we could get some closeups, it would be easier to help you along the way, and also fron some different angles.

[Ryder]

Originally posted by Mikademius
I am stroking my hand on one of these all day long and I noticed a couple of things:

The section with the wheel and cruisebuttons is too wide, the logo is rounder, more oval. The gripsupport for your thumb also har a bit too hard edges. The material on the mousebuttons (the grey) has a very noisy appearance. If we could get some closeups, it would be easier to help you along the way, and also fron some different angles.


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are you serious??

[Mikademius]

????????????????? Are you serious??

What??

[Holyfield]

thanks for the comment Mikademius, I appreciate that..
you are right with everything you said, I didnt had good mx500 reference pictures so I modelled freestyle :) the model is not 100% accurate, but I think it turned out pretty ok

I made the changes you suggested

heres a closeup render and wireframe

http://members.chello.at/e.esener/mx500hdri.jpg

http://members.chello.at/e.esener/mx500wire.jpg

[Aeroplane]

Looks very good!:applause:

[Mikademius]

Thanks for the other views. OK, listen up: Look at the attached image with corrections;
http://andersson.darkglade.com/mx500/mx500_fix.jpg


1- the edge near the left mouse button is WAY TOO HARD, the gap is minimal.

2- The surface is alot smoother. Your model seems to have a peak.

3- The cruisesection goes all the way down, as the thin lines indicate

4- The rounding is a lot smoother.

I've also included some views of it so you get the form better. The camera is a bit ****ed at the moment so the images are a bit blurry. Good look on further modeling :)

http://andersson.darkglade.com/mx500/mx500.jpg

[LoneLobo]

man, you should clean your keyboard xD

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