Finally it's a Troll!!!

[Gkaine]

nice modeling so far

[Ionized]

Very nice work there. I love fantasy pieces... I guess it's DnD geek in me.

I'd have a look at the muscles around where the bicep and tricep muscles join on the outside arm. Theres seems to be a bit of kinking or something.

Other than that, very cool.

[Martyr]

Hi maya4fun Ok first i think the main problem is from the joint of the shoulder the uper arm and the pectoral muscle. I think that you have made a useless part there...look some anatomy pics or look at yourself. Beside this point its going to be very cool
:buttrock:

[Maya4fun]

Thank you for your comments. Indeed for the anatomy of the arm it' s not that. I will correct it very quickly, and thank you still !!

[Maya4fun]

Finally, I think that I saw too many faces for the model. :hmm: I thus prefer to remake the head the remainder will follow. It is a first outline but that gives a good idea, I hope. Your comments are welcome. :wavey:

I know, i'm so undecided but i think that's a good way for my character.. :p

front

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/TrollFace.jpg

side




http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/TrollSide.jpg

[Martyr]

Hi, maya4 fun, he was good before...but now i sense that he will be better i thinks theres is some problem with the lips on the face-view the side view is correct I Like the simiesque-look continue that way...:buttrock:

[Maya4fun]

Hi,
I' ve improve models it and to begin the ears.
CandC welcome!!

:wavey:
Face
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/TrollFace2.jpg

Profile
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/TrollSide2.jpg


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Special thanks to Daniel (it's a friend of mine) for good consulting about the model...

[Maya4fun]

Another update...
Comments and Crits appreciate..:buttrock:

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/Troll3.jpg

[Martyr]

Its really better this time i really like it he will be great you really improve the lips part J'ai vraiment hate de voir le reste...:buttrock:

[lmc]

Overall look good...just the ear...hmm, maybe should make it better....:applause:

[Maya4fun]

Whaaa thx for all comments:love:

Martyyr25--->merci pour le comments c'est vrai que je prefère cette version car celle d'avant était trop lourde donc ingérable mais j'ai compris la leçon. :rolleyes:

Imc--->For ear don't worry i work it but at this time, ear are not attached at the head because i adjust the mapping before and after the finition.

[Maya4fun]

All right, i know it's small update but I post nevertheless .
I neck grew bigger to him so that its mass is more imposing.

CandC appreciate!:buttrock:

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/test2.jpg

over view
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/test3.jpg

[Maximus Groff]

thats great!

wanna see soon your bump maps.. ;) hehehe

[Martyr]

ohhhhhhhhh! yes its going to be a fabulous troll continue that way nothing to critics for now...

[Gkaine]

lookn good

[Zoltan_cs]

c'est trop fort l'ami !!!
J'adore!

[Troub]

this guy has such an impressive sideview :bounce:
keep up

[Maya4fun]

Thanks for all comments guys!!!
I' m so content that you like that I will try quickly to finish it. I think of making a update this evening if all goes. Well, once again thank you for the comments.

[Maya4fun]

I wanted to finish it quickly but I think that it will take me a little more time.... It is not serious gently but surely. :p I ' ve begin the corp I will base myself on the corp of a large gorilla for more logic in the model and the anim... On this subject I research documentation on the gorillas. (Some photo or design if you have that' cool!!).
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/front2.jpg

CandC appreciate.:buttrock:

[Martyr]

Hi, He is looking good Here i got some links I dont if it will be enough...
http://www.animalinfo.org/species/primate/gorigori.htm#picture
http://www.primate.wisc.edu/pin/factsheets/gorilla_gorilla.html
http://www.primates.com
There is not too many pictures but some cool infos!

[Maya4fun]

Hi, thanks Martyyr25 i look this sites now cu for another update ;)

[JasonA]

Looks great! maybe give him more wrinkles/folds on the forehead and sides of the lower chest

[dominicqwek]

Hey..nice work you got there. the spacing between the facial features are to human...perhaps you wanna play ard with the scale of each feature. what about widening the mouth..hey trolls do have large mouths dont they?

cant wait to see this guy textured..:D :D :D

[Maya4fun]

Ta for all comments...Before continuing the corp I make a first test of bump to give an idea of what there is to improve on the face. <I think add wrinkles after> For the moment the bump are to strong it's normal, that's just repair for me to add wrinkles...voilà

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/Bump1Side.jpg

C and C appreciate :wavey:

[AshodT]

salut!!

bien bo tout ca!

continu a taffe dessu,retouche un peu loreil,le reste est cool!

nice work man,i like it :beer:

[JasonA]

looks really good, The nose ring and teeth add great character

[Maya4fun]

Here we go!!! :d first test of color mapping at this time i think i stop the color map, for the moment.
I' ve added hands too.

color map test :


http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/texture1.jpg

body :
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/front3.jpg

[Martyr]

Wow itd very cool i like your map its very cool continue that way, in fact i like the complete work...

[Troll_primal]

c'est pas mal du tout.


vivement la suite.

[Screwball]

ohhhhhhhhh! yes its going to be a fabulous troll continue that way nothing to critics for now...

[Maya4fun]

Thanks for comments guys.
This is a small update. Actually i have no time to finish it but I promises to finish it in few weeks (mmmmmh, maybe 2month!!!i know it's TOO LONG but time is money ;) :) )...
Comments and critics appreciate!!
Face
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T2.jpg

profil

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T1.jpg
:wip:

[Martyr]

Wo he is cool maybe the part between his legs is to large...look some big person and you will see that the two hips touch themself...Maybe its not coherent for this TROLL because he is not human but check it out...He is very great man and your textures are great too Continue like this and it would be a first class character:buttrock:

[KolbyJukes]

Looking very nice.

I like what you've done with it. Check out some sholder anatomy at fineart.sk (www.finart.sk), cause they should be less sunken and more muscular.

-Kol.

[Maya4fun]

Thank you!!! :cool:
Martyyr25>yes it's true. :D

KWAK> Ta for the muscular doc but i don't think add more muscular mass because the Troll measure 2.5 meters and as you see it's large character but i improve the legs.

[BadKarma]

hey thats pretty sweet man, cant wait to see it wiv all the textures n shizzel :D

BadKarma

[Maya4fun]

Here we go!!!! after a fiew weeks, i come back to finish him....
Ok i have modeling a foot (but too large i think) i have changing color map for a green color and actually i applied a armur and accessories (for pants i have not defined but cloth style).
For a general style >Samurai/orc.
That's all for a moment
Let's crit's and comments..
:wip:
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T17.jpg

[Martyr]

Hi maya4fun, i relly relly like the upper part of you character includind the belt part, but the legs(i know you havent done the clothing wrinkles yet) maybe its just the way you texture thats bother me...The feet look odd to me surely too long I know he is not human-like, mabye you can check it... I dont like the green very much but thats is just me its a little bit cliché just for me...i prefer him with a bigger belly...
Anyway he is going to be very cool continue:buttrock:

[KashGarinn]

Well..

You wanted crits ;)

I think the face looks good, but the body could be more animal.. Check out images of gorilla and chimpanzee body structure, they're great. Also the local aging computer geek with his hunched back and beer-belly should do nicely :D

He looks now more as a chubby dude with a mask than a troll. Take care in the details in the backside and legs.

K.

[Maya4fun]

Thank you for all critics
I appreciate your criticisms constructive, I thus will improve it, thank you still!!

:(sorry for my realllly bad english...



my web site :
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/

over threads : http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=57848

[Maya4fun]

Fiew detail adding......
what did you think?> :thumbsup: or :thumbsdow

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T18.jpg



my web site :
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/

over threads : http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=57848

[Maya4fun]

Mmmmmmmmmmm? no reply? What's happening guys you don't like my stuff :annoyed: He's similar to Hulk isn't it?
C and C appreciate!!!
What( did you think about collar of dolls?:D

[Maya4fun]

Well,
It is not trousers but a skirt!! (collection Jean-Paul Gaultier) :D
(it's a joke)
I have reduce the feet too.

NOT FINISH : texture face/bump face/spec face---->and for the body too.
The texture of a skirt are not predefined.
(I know for the body KashGarinn but i have no time to push the models at the maximum :shrug:

Constructive critics welcome. :buttrock:


http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T19.jpg

detail
http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/TZ19.jpg

[Martyr]

Hi, I like the skirt idea but maybe its too brand new maybe makes some holes and scratchs ant take off the bottom bordure and scratch it... make some drapery on it look too plain...just a suggestion
Your skin texture look good espacially on the head(its llooks darker than the rest of the body, isn't?)

the feet still have some problem i think not sure, and the joint with the bicep and the arm (avant bras) is a litle bit odd.

Dont get me wrong he is good but he can be truly better, When i saw what you have done with the head im sure you can fix these minor problems



:buttrock:

[borchert]

Very cool !!
But there is something about the toes they are to squere-ish.
Keep it up !!

[Maya4fun]

Ta for comments and crits :rolleyes:

borchert> for the toes i work on it.
Martyyr25>Happy to see you again man :D .Je vais retoucher l'avant bras et effectivement la texture de la tête est bien plus foncée mais je n'ai pas encore mis de map spéculaire sur le corp cela doit y jouer mais merci du renseignement :thumbsup: Traduction (quickly)>It's true for color of the head i remediate at this and arm too .

:beer:

[Maya4fun]

I've improved a color of body.
Actually i models a shoulder pad (not finish ).
CandC appreciate...:buttrock:
:wavey:

http://mapage.noos.fr/s.emmanuel/images/T20.jpg

[Martyr]

Hi, the overall texture looking good but what is the green-blue spot on his belly i thinks its looking bizarre

You shoulder pad his cool continue that way
:buttrock:

[Martyr]

sorry i put two times on the button!!!:hmm:

[Remi]

I think the bump on the face needs some work....the body bump and the head just don't seem to work together IMO....nice job though:thumbsup:

[p0lym0rph]

yep,c'est tres sympa,le seul truc que je vois a reprocher pour l'instant,c'est la partie armure sur l"épaule qui n'est pas tres convaincante,mais c'est un wip,donc pour l'intant je dis :thumbsup:

[Maya4fun]

Thanks for all guys, ure response are = at my motivation !!!
But, actually i have big trouble to research an employement.:thumbsdow For the moment i stop this WIP to concentrate my research for an employement......
I have no time to finish him but i promise to finish him one day. :shrug:

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