why you speak when you ready to shoot, yasser yassien (3D)

[behindfaces]

very tough work yassien and so good as well :thumbsup:

[paulrus]

Your ammo looks like solid brass. If that were the case, it would explode the moment you tried to shoot.

Try something like Federal Hydroshocks:

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/221/458326419_bddc714064.jpg

[HEKTOR]

Nice, but....
To big bump on wood, bad lighting, to smooth shadows.

[CGKSA]

hi yaser this nice work i like it go forwards with maya

[azynkron]

I agree with the other ones..

You'd also have a problem with attaching that silencer to your
pistol..

Nice materials on the metal parts but it need more work.. ok?

[downs_mass]

fine yasser
continue

[diaaking]

great work :bounce:

[yassein]

hello everone
iam so glade with your words

paulrus , thanks for your notice here is my change to the ammo

http://up.cgway.net/uploads/735fd02a38.jpg

but still without rendering due to some problems with my pc

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HEKTOR, i reduced the bump on the wood , thank you

and if you guys have any idea to imporve the render or the materials
relatedto the work, you will be most welcome
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InFrame,azynkron,downs_mass, and diaaking iam so happy with your words

thanks everyone :) :thumbsup:

[HEKTOR]

Try use two light's directional, one yellow with not to much shadows, shadow will be dark blue. Second light should be blue, but don't emit spectacular, and very low intesitiv.

Sorry for my English!

[scrimski]

Could use much improvement.
Aside from the very clichè motif I'm missing shadows.
The gun looks very undefined, no sharp edges, the bump of the wooden planks is too strong and way to blurry, try to find better(read higher resolution) maps for them.

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